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The System Hunter
The System Hunter
Author: Ryco
Chapter 1: The Stranger Who Spent My Life
Author: Ryco
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At 00:03:11, Elias Venn learned that a stranger could spend his life.

He was kneeling in a wrecked commuter carriage when the number appeared across his vision, red enough to stain the darkness. For one absurd second, he thought it was another warning from his cracked visor. Then the digits fell to 00:03:10, and he felt the tiny medical implant beneath his collarbone turn hot.

SYSTEM NOTICE: UNAUTHORIZED TIME DEBIT.

PREVIOUS BALANCE: 23:58:42.

CURRENT BALANCE: 00:03:09.

APPEAL WINDOW: CLOSED.

Someone had taken almost an entire day from him.

“Stay with me,” he told the woman pinned beneath the carriage door. Her coat was soaked with diesel and blood. Above them, the tunnel lights flickered as distant alarms announced another system-enforced curfew. The woman’s own timer hovered beside her face: 00:11:06.

“Leave,” she whispered. “You can still make the stairs.”

A rational man would have done it. Elias was twenty-eight, had a sister waiting for him in North Ward, and possessed no hunter license, no weapon, and no credits with which to buy another minute. But his fingers were already beneath the bent metal. He had pulled people out of buildings for six years. Stopping now felt less like a decision than forgetting how to breathe.

He wedged a rescue jack under the door. The handle stuck on the third pump. Elias forced it again, felt the old injury in his left wrist flare, and watched another fourteen seconds vanish. When the opening widened, he dragged the woman free by the shoulders.

His counter read 00:02:31.

The woman grabbed his sleeve. “He said you would come.”

“Who?”

“A man in a gray coat. He checked your name. Said the transfer would be clean.”

Elias froze. Transfers required consent or a judicial warrant. He had signed nothing. He had received no court notice. His sister Mara had spent three months training to maintain the medical implants; she had drilled that rule into him after the first people died when their accounts expired.

“Where did he go?”

“Platform six.” The woman’s eyes searched his face. “I tried to stop him.”

The overhead speaker crackled. “All unlicensed responders must withdraw. Hunter pursuit active. Target: Jarek Hollen. Alive or deceased.”

A translucent card opened in front of Elias without his touch.

EMERGENCY CONTRACT: APPREHEND JAREK HOLLEN.

REWARD—ALIVE: +04:00:00, 120 XP.

REWARD—DECEASED: +08:00:00, 120 XP.

TIME LIMIT: 00:02:14.

FAILURE PENALTY: -00:01:00.

LICENSE: PROVISIONAL ON ACCEPTANCE.

The disparity hit him harder than the theft. A dead man was worth twice a living one. Whoever ran the System had priced an execution above an arrest.

He could search for the thief without accepting. If he failed, he would simply die when his clock hit zero. If he accepted and failed, the penalty would kill him sooner. The contract card pulsed, patient and obscene.

A voice spoke from his earpiece. “Elias? The hospital’s locked its doors.” Mara sounded out of breath. “They say my time record has been frozen. What is going on?”

His hand shook. He had intended to tell her about the missing hours once he got clear of the tunnel. Now she sounded as though she were running.

“Stay somewhere public,” he said. “Find the duty medic. Don’t authorize anything. Not even if the message says it’s from me.”

A crash came through the line, followed by a stranger ordering her to put down her phone.

“Mara?”

No answer.

The counter reached 00:01:58.

He accepted the contract.

NEW TITLE: PROVISIONAL HUNTER.

LEVEL: 0.

EQUIPMENT PERMISSION: EMERGENCY TOOLS.

Elias snatched the rescue jack from beneath the door. He could still feel the stranger’s hand gripping his sleeve, could still hear Mara’s interrupted call. In the tunnel ahead, a tall figure in a gray coat turned toward the stairs. The man paused, looked directly at Elias, and smiled as if they had already agreed on the rules.

Then Hollen raised a remote control.

On the platform display, every door flashed LOCKED. The train behind Elias began to move. The rescued woman was still lying across the tracks. He had one minute and forty-two seconds to catch the man who had stolen his life—or save the person he had just pulled free.

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