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Chapter 13: The Maze of Multiple Choice
Author: Maa_in
last update2026-04-30 11:10:00

The world didn’t just end; it folded. One moment, Raka’s fingers were grazing the cold, silver surface of the locket dangling from Luna’s neck, and the next, the sensory overload of his collapsing studio apartment—the smell of ozone, the roar of the temporal storm, the terrifying sight of the Echo—was replaced by a silence so absolute it felt like a physical weight against his eardrums. The floor beneath his feet vanished, but he didn't fall. Instead, he stood upon nothingness, a vast, bleached horizon of white that stretched infinitely in every direction.

"Luna?" Raka’s voice came out thin, stripped of its echo. He looked down at his hands. They were translucent, shimmering with the same violet hue that had infected the apartment. He wasn't entirely physical here; he was a consciousness, a soul caught in the architecture of a machine that shouldn't exist.

"You’re in the seed, Raka," a voice whispered. It was Luna’s, but it didn't come from a single direction. It was woven into the very fabric of the white void, sounding faint and fragile, like a radio signal fading into the static of a storm. "My memories... they’re fragmenting. The paradox you created is tearing the archive apart. You have to find the anchor. You have to find him."

"Where am I, Luna? What is this place?" Raka spun around, his heart hammering a frantic rhythm against the cage of his ribs.

Suddenly, the white void shuddered. From the floorless expanse, thousands of glowing, rectangular screens began to rise like gravestones in a digital cemetery. They were holographic, flickering with a dizzying array of colors and sounds. Raka stumbled back as a screen drifted past him, showing a version of himself he barely recognized. In it, he was an old man, sitting on a porch in a quiet village, his face etched with peace but his eyes haunted by a profound loneliness. He was alone. No Luna. No success. Just a quiet, slow fade into the earth.

Another screen lunged toward him. In this one, Raka was the Monster. He was standing in a boardroom made of black obsidian, his eyes as cold as a predator’s as he signed a document that would ruin a thousand lives. He looked powerful. He looked majestic. And he looked utterly, irredeemably dead inside.

"The maze," Raka breathed, his breath hitching in his throat. "It’s a maze of multiple choice."

"Every screen is a possibility," Luna’s voice echoed, more strained now. "The universe is trying to decide which Raka Satya is the real one. If you don't choose, the timeline will simply delete everything to resolve the error. You have to destroy the anchor of the original future. You have to kill the Mogul."

Raka began to run. He sprinted through the forest of holograms, his feet making no sound on the invisible floor. The images blurred past him like a fever dream. He saw himself as a successful artist, a drunkard in a gutter, a father holding a child he’d never known, a corpse in a high-speed car chase. Each screen was a life he could have led, a path his choices could have paved.

But as he ran, the air began to curdled. The pristine white of the void was stained by a creeping ink, a blackness that seeped from the edges of the holograms.

"Did you think I would let you wander through my kingdom unhindered?"

The voice was his own, but it was layered with a terrifying authority. Raka skidded to a halt. Standing atop a pile of shifting holographic screens was the Echo. He looked even more solid here, in the realm of the mind, than he had in the physical world. He adjusted the cuff of his bespoke suit, the fabric shimmering with a dark, oily light.

"This is my home, Raka," the Echo said, stepping down from the screens as if descending a grand staircase. "This archive is the record of my triumph. You are a virus here. A momentary glitch in the grand design of my ascension."

"You're a nightmare, not a design!" Raka shouted, his fists clenching. "Luna is dying because of you! The world is breaking because of you!"

The Echo smiled, a jagged, horizontal wound that didn't reach his freezing eyes. "The world is breaking because you are trying to fight gravity. You saw the bank account, didn't you? You felt the thrill of Baskara cowering before you. That wasn't 'training,' Raka. That was an awakening. You loved it. You loved the power more than you love her."

"I loved the justice!" Raka countered, though a sliver of doubt, cold as a needle, pierced his heart.

"Justice is just a word losers use to describe their revenge," the Echo sneered. He raised a hand, and several holographic screens flew toward Raka like guided missiles.

Raka dove to the side, rolling across the invisible floor. One screen shattered near his head, showering him in fragments of a memory where he was being arrested for fraud. He scrambled to his feet, but the Echo was already there, moving with a fluid, unnatural grace. The future version of himself grabbed Raka by the throat, hoisting him off the ground with effortless strength.

"Look at them," the Echo hissed, gesturing to the screens around them. "Thousands of Rakas who were 'good' and ended up with nothing. This one died of a treatable fever because he couldn't afford medicine. This one lost his house to a bank because he was too 'sincere' to lie on a loan application. Is this the life you want for her? A life of struggle? A life of salty porridge and damp walls?"

Raka struggled against the Echo’s grip, his vision beginning to swim. The strength of his future self wasn't just physical; it was the weight of a thousand logical arguments. The Echo was the voice in the back of his head that told him to take the shortcut, to ignore the consequences, to put himself first. He wasn't just fighting a ghost; he was fighting his own ambition.

"I... I want a life where she doesn't cry because of me!" Raka managed to gasp out, his hands clawing at the Echo’s solid, smoke-like wrists.

"Then you are a fool," the Echo growled. He threw Raka across the void.

Raka tumbled, crashing through a screen that showed his wedding to Luna. For a fleeting second, he felt the warmth of her hand in his, heard the music, smelled the scent of black roses that wasn't cloying or funereal, but sweet and full of hope. It was the anchor. The center of the maze.

"Raka! The screens!" Luna’s voice was a scream now, vibrating with a desperate urgency. "The one in the center! The Mogul! Shatter it!"

Raka looked up. In the distance, rising above the other holograms, was a screen larger and brighter than the rest. It pulsed with a dark, golden light. Inside it, the Future Raka sat on a throne of glass and steel, looking out over a city he had bought and sold. This was the anchor—the primary timeline that the universe was trying to preserve. This was the 'Golden Raka,' the version of himself that the Echo was fighting to protect.

Raka scrambled to his feet, but the black ink was everywhere now, rising like a tide. The Echo stood between him and the Golden Screen, his form expanding, his suit tattered into wings of shadow.

"If you destroy that screen, you destroy the only reason she came back!" the Echo roared, his voice shaking the white void. "Without my success, there is no time travel! There is no Luna! You will erase the very moment you met her! You will be back in that studio, alone, and she will be a stranger you never knew!"

Raka froze. The logic hit him like a physical blow. If he erased the Mogul, he erased the tragedy. If the tragedy never happened, Luna would never have a reason to travel back ten years. The last few weeks—the burnt toast, the salty porridge, the dances in the rain, the fierce arguments, and the quiet moments of connection—would be wiped from his memory. He would save her, yes, but he would lose her in the process.

"Choose, Raka Satya!" the Echo taunted, his shadow looming over the maze. "Choose the lonely path of the saint, or the glorious path of the king!"

Raka looked at the Golden Screen. He saw the Mogul Raka’s face. It was handsome. It was flawless. And it was the face of a man who would never know the taste of a meal made with love, because he didn't believe in it. He saw the Luna in that screen—the broken, bruised ornament.

Then, Raka closed his eyes. He didn't think about the 200 million. He didn't think about the luxury suits. He thought about the weight of Luna’s head on his shoulder in the apartment. He thought about the way she looked when she was sleeping, her brow furrowed as if she were carrying the weight of the world.

"I’d rather be a stranger to her than her tormentor," Raka whispered.

He didn't run this time. He charged.

The Echo let out a howl of rage, sweeping his shadow-wings forward to crush him. But Raka didn't fight the shadow. He dove through it, letting the cold darkness wash over him, ignoring the whispers of a thousand failed futures. He reached the Golden Screen, his hand glowing with a brilliant, silver light—the energy of a pure, selfless regret.

"No!" the Echo screamed, his form beginning to dissolve into ash.

Raka slammed his fist into the center of the Golden Screen.

The glass didn't just break; it detonated. A shockwave of pure white light erupted from the point of impact, tearing through the maze, incinerating the black ink, and shattering the thousands of holograms into a billion points of stardust. The Echo was silenced, his form swept away like smoke in a hurricane.

Raka felt himself being pulled backward, the white void collapsing in on itself. He saw Luna’s face one last time in the swirling light. She wasn't the mentor. She wasn't the broken wife. She was just... Luna. And she was smiling.

"You did it, Raka," her voice whispered, fading into the distance. "But the cost... the cost is high."

Raka’s eyes snapped open.

He was back on the floor of his studio apartment. The air was still, the temporal storm having vanished as quickly as it had arrived. The shattered glass of the windows lay in heaps on the floor, reflecting the dim, gray light of a Jakarta dawn.

"Luna?" Raka choked out, his body aching as if he’d been run over by a freight train.

He looked to the sofa. She was there. Her skin was no longer translucent; the color had returned to her cheeks, and her breathing was steady and deep. She was alive. Her mind was restored.

Raka let out a sob of pure relief, reaching out to touch her hand. He stopped.

On Luna’s wrist, the silver watch was no longer pulsing with violet light. It was glowing with a steady, clinical red. But the digits had changed. They weren't counting down from twelve days anymore.

07:00:00:00

Raka’s heart stopped. "Seven days? Luna, wake up! We lost five days! Just like that?"

Luna’s eyes opened. They were sharp again. The "Loving Wife" was gone, replaced by the cold, determined mentor who had first broken into his room. She sat up, her gaze immediately falling on the timer. A shadow of profound sorrow crossed her face, so brief Raka almost missed it, before her expression hardened into a mask of iron.

"The maze had a price, Raka," she said, her voice sounding older, more weary than he’d ever heard it. "You destroyed the anchor of my timeline. The universe is now accelerating the correction. It wants me gone before you can change anything else."

She looked at him, and for the first time, there was no condescension in her eyes. There was only a terrifying, ticking finality.

"We have one week, Raka Satya," Luna said, her voice a velvet-wrapped blade. "One week to finish your training, or the version of you that survives will have no one left to save."

Raka looked at his bandaged hand, then at the empty, quiet street outside. The 200 million was still in his bank. The luxury suit was still in the closet. But the air in the room felt thinner, as if the very oxygen of his future was being siphoned away.

The Echo was gone, but the silence he left behind was far more deafening. Raka realized then that he hadn't just shattered a screen; he had set a fuse. And the countdown was no longer a warning—it was a death sentence.

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