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Chapter 2A: A Master’s Praise, A Disciple’s Jealousy
Author: Sikky Turner
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The hospital’s atrium glittered with cameras and white coats. Banners draped across the mezzanine read “In Honor of Life Restored.”

Rick stood beside Master Yuren Sun at the podium, heart pounding louder than the applause.

Yuren’s voice carried over the crowd. “Apprentice Franklin achieved what we deemed impossible, reviving a collapsed Golden Pulse.”

Polite clapping rolled through the hall; reporters leaned forward, holo-recorders glowing. Rick managed a stiff bow.

Across the rows of physicians, he caught Isaac Voss’s expression, smiling just enough to hide the contempt in his eyes.

When the crowd quieted, Yuren’s tone shifted, almost too soft for the microphones. “Yet, even golden light can blind those who gaze too long.”

A murmur rippled. Rick blinked, uncertain whether it was a warning or a proverb. After the ceremony, Yuren placed a hand on his shoulder. “Come by the study this afternoon. We need to talk.”

Rick forced a smile. “Yes, Master.”

The cameras kept flashing; every lens felt like an eye judging him. From the edge of the hall, Evelyn watched, white lab coat over her floral dress, pride mixed with something darker. When their gazes met, she mouthed “Be careful.”

Yuren’s private study smelled of aged parchment and tea. Diagrams of meridians shimmered in suspended light; scrolls lined the walls like silent witnesses.

Rick stood near the window, waiting while Yuren poured tea into two small cups. “You spoke beautifully this morning,” Rick said, trying for levity.

Yuren’s smile was brief. “I spoke the truth. Beauty is irrelevant.” He set a cup in front of Rick. “Tell me, do you know what you awakened that night?”

Rick hesitated. “You called it the Golden Meridian Flow.”

“More than that.” Yuren’s eyes flicked to an ancient scroll on the shelf. “It is the remnant of a divine system, one that hears the pulse of creation itself. Those who touch it uninvited… invite echo.”

Rick frowned. “Echo?”

“Death, madness, calamity, call it what you will. Every miracle disturbs the balance.”

Rick’s voice sharpened. “Then why train us to heal at all? Why teach methods you fear?”

“Because compassion without discipline is chaos.”

Yuren’s words landed like blows. Rick stared into the steam rising from his cup. “When I treated that child, I didn’t feel chaos. I felt… clarity. Like the world was breathing with me.”

“That feeling,” Yuren said softly, “is precisely how the madness begins.”

Silence settled. Outside, rain whispered against the glass. Rick finally asked, “So what now? You want me to pretend it never happened?”

Yuren looked tired. “I want you to live long enough to understand what it means.”

Rick glanced down at his wrist; beneath his sleeve, the faint golden rune pulsed once, then faded.

The apprentice ward buzzed with quiet rivalry. Screens projected patient simulations, virtual meridian maps, digital organs pulsing in rhythm.

Rick joined the cluster of students around a holographic patient suffering from “energy imbalance.” Isaac was already there, coat immaculate, tone clipped.

“Standard correction at points Q-14 to S-3,” Isaac instructed. “We balance flow manually, no improvisation.”

Rick watched the projection flicker, the simulated heart still faltering. “That path only stabilizes output, not rhythm.”

Isaac’s brow furrowed. “You have a better idea?”

Rick stepped forward, fingers hovering over the interface. “Link Q-14 to T-7, skip S-3. Cross-bridge the meridian. It’ll sync the pulse faster.”

“That’s not in the manual,” another student whispered.

Rick smiled faintly. “Neither was the cure last night.”

He executed the adjustment. The holographic pulse leveled instantly; the screen turned green.

A wave of murmurs swept the room. Isaac’s jaw tightened. “You think breaking rules makes you enlightened?”

“No,” Rick replied evenly. “It makes me adaptable.”

Isaac slammed his palm on the console. “You got lucky once. Don’t mistake intuition for mastery.”

The door opened. Yuren entered silently, gaze sweeping the room. “What’s this commotion?”

Isaac straightened. “He’s undermining standard protocols, Master.”

Rick started to respond, but Yuren raised a hand. “Enough. If conflict breeds skill, you’ll settle it through cooperation.”

“Cooperation?” Isaac repeated, incredulous.

“You’ll share the next clinical assignment. One patient, one report.”

Rick blinked. “Together?”

Yuren nodded. “Perhaps you’ll learn balance from each other.”

When he left, Isaac leaned close, voice low and venomous. “I don’t need your charity, Franklin. Keep your miracles to yourself.”

Rick said nothing, but the silence between them crackled like static. As he packed his notes, he heard Isaac mutter to another apprentice, “He thinks he’s touched heaven. Let’s see how heaven feels when it burns.”

Rick didn’t turn around, but a cold weight settled in his chest.

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