CHAPTER 009
The pain was quiet, deep, and relentless. It felt like molten glass twisting through the wreckage of his chest, threading through pathways Kieran thought were gone forever. The System didn’t heal gently it worked like a cold, precise machine, forcing the 324 units of Essence through him as if repairing a shattered pipeline.Time lost all meaning. There was only the grinding ache inside him and the damp chill of the stone floor seeping into his bones.
A faint ping in his mind marked the progress:
[Allocation complete. Meridian Cluster ‘Lesser Heart’ 23% restored. Basic function regained.]
[Host can now passively absorb ambient spiritual energy at 0.1% efficiency of a 1st Stage Qi Condensation cultivator.]
It was pitiful. A trickle where others had rivers. But a trickle was better than the empty desert he’d felt before.
He felt it then a tiny pull in the air, almost imagined, drawing the faintest bit of spiritual energy into the repaired meridian. Not enough to really fight with, barely enough to sense. But it was something.
The screech of the iron bar on the cell door snapped him back. Dawn’s first grey light cut through a narrow slit high on the wall. Two overseers, faces hard as stone, entered without a word.
“Up,” one barked, gripping his arm.
Kieran struggled to his feet, muscles stiff, every movement painful. They yanked his wrists behind him and bound them with rough rope, the fibers cutting into his skin.
The taller overseer leaned close, voice low and cruel. “You’re lucky the Hall Master didn’t catch you in here first.”
“I… I didn’t do anything,” Kieran rasped, voice hoarse.
The overseer sneered. “Nothing? You’re a custodian in a restricted area during an alarm. A broken disciple sword. A fugitive escape. That’s more than enough.”
Kieran swallowed, heart hammering. His ribs ached, his chest still carried the lynx’s grief like a weight, and every nerve screamed in fear of what was coming.
They dragged him out of the cell and into the courtyard, where Marcus waited, robes immaculate, eyes sharp with triumph.
“Well,” Marcus said, voice smooth as silk, “the cockroach finally crawls into the daylight. Ready for your punishment?”
Kieran kept his head down, feeling the tiny, precious hum of spiritual energy in his chest. It wasn’t much but it was a thread. A first thread. And if he could hold onto it, maybe, just maybe, he could weave it into something stronger.
They marched him through the waking Custodial Quarter. Workers froze mid-task, eyes on him some curious, some pitying, some scowling. Word had spread fast: the cripple who survived the pit had crossed the line.
The guards didn’t speak. They led him out of the quarter and into the open outer grounds of the sect, toward a gray stone building that looked more like a tomb than a hall. Its lower floors had no windows. This was the Discipline Hall. The air felt heavy, like it had absorbed decades of punishment.
Inside, the hall was cold and echoing. They shoved him into a bare chamber. At the far end, on a raised platform, sat Hall Master Vex. The man was thin and wiry, his face lined like old leather, eyes cold as ice. Marcus stood to his right, tidy, calm, the picture of self-righteous anger. Elder Garth stood to his left, lips pressed into a thin, disappointed line.
Beside the dais lay the punishment whip. It was as tall as a man, braided leather covered with tiny hooked thorns that glimmered green. Spirit-thorns. They didn’t just cut they poisoned the wounds, leaving fire in the flesh for days.
Vex’s voice cut the silence, dry and sharp. “Kieran of the Custodial Quarter! You are accused of stealing a valuable spirit-beast resource, destroying a disciple’s weapon, and committing assault. How do you plead?”
Kieran swallowed, his throat dry. “I… I didn’t steal anything,” he said, voice trembling but firm. “The sword broke when he attacked me. I was only defending myself.”
Marcus’s lips curled in a thin, cruel smile. “Defending yourself? A custodian, striking at a disciple? You dare?”
Garth’s eyes narrowed, his voice cold. “Words won’t save you here, Kieran. Every action has consequences. Silence, if nothing else, may be wise.”
Kieran’s mouth was dry. He looked at Marcus’s smug face, at Garth’s disdain, at the waiting whip. Denial was pointless. Explanation was impossible.
“The sword broke when he was attacking me,” Kieran said, his voice firmer than he felt. “I didn’t steal any core.”
Marcus stepped forward, a sneer on his lips. “Hall Master, he’s lying. He was caught in the restricted area, fleeing. The core is missing. Everyone knows his kind troublemakers. He’s crippled from the exams and now stoops to sabotage and theft.”
Vex’s cold eyes stayed fixed on Kieran. “Elder Garth, your testimony.”
Garth cleared his throat. “The worker was out of place during the alarm. A disciple’s property was destroyed in his presence. The core is gone. He has no alibi. The evidence while circumstantial points to him. His presence is disruptive.”
It was all stacked against him: the word of a rising disciple and an Elder versus a lowly, crippled custodian. Kieran’s stomach sank. The outcome felt already decided.
Vex nodded once. “The evidence is enough. For theft and destruction: ten lashes with the spirit-thorn whip. For assault on a disciple: five more. Sentence begins immediately.”
No trial. No argument. Just punishment.
The overseers shoved Kieran to a metal post in the center of the hall. They ripped the ragged robe from his back, leaving him exposed to the cold air, and bound his wrists to the iron ring.
Kieran pressed his forehead against the metal, shivering. He could hear Marcus’s soft, satisfied exhale from the dais.
“Let this be a lesson to anyone dwelling in the shadows of the sect,” Vex intoned, his voice echoing through the hall. “Know your place.”
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The silence after Marcus left was thick with the smell of waste and fury. Kieran stood on shaky legs, the cracked crucible a cold, gritty weight in his hand. In the channel, Lars finally hauled himself out, vomiting onto the stones. He shot Kieran a look of pure, unhinged hatred before stumbling away, dripping foulness, to follow his master.Kieran knew he had about five minutes of grace. The time it would take for Lars to get to the baths, for Marcus to cool down from his rage and start planning. The beating he’d get if he was caught here would make the spirit-thorn whip feel like a memory.He had to move.Shoving the crucible into the large pocket of his work apron, he grabbed his hooked pole and shuffled away from the sluices, not toward the bunkhouse, but deeper into the service alleys. He needed a hole. Somewhere no one went.He found it behind the abandoned tannery a collapsed lean-to of rotten timbers, half-buried in years of blown leaves and dirt. It was a tomb of neglect.
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They dumped him just inside the Custodial Quarter gate, his torn robe tossed on top of him like a shroud. The world was a blurred tunnel of white-hot pain radiating from his back. He lay on the packed dirt, unable to move, listening to the retreating footsteps of the overseers.[Host status: Critical. Multiple lacerations contaminated with ‘Soul-Burn’ toxin. Systemic shock imminent.]The System’s words floated through the haze. He knew he was dying. The spirit-thorn poison was doing its work, creeping toward his heart and core.But something else was happening, too. That tiny, patched-together meridian cluster in his chest the ‘Lesser Heart’ conduit was still humming. It was pulling at the ambient energy, yes, but more importantly, it was actively tugging at the poison inside him. Not to expel it, but to process it.[Emergency salvage protocol active. Treating ‘Soul-Burn’ toxin as high-grade corrosive waste.]The grinding, industrial sensation returned, this time focused on the woun
THE BROKEN THE UNBROKEN
CHAPTER 010The first lash hit without warning.It wasn’t like anything Kieran had imagined. The leather snapped against his skin with a sharp thwack, but that was just the start. In the next heartbeat, the tiny spirit-thorns dug in, burning like acid and fire at the same time. The poison seeped into his nerves, turning the line of impact into a river of pure, screaming pain.Kieran’s body arched hard against the post. A guttural scream tore from his throat.[Critical damage detected. Toxin spreading. Activating emergency mitigation.]The System’s calm, mechanical voice cut through the agony like a lifeline. The tiny, newly-fixed meridian cluster in his chest stirred, pulling in the faintest bit of ambient Qi. It didn’t make him strong. It barely made him human. But it did something isolating the poison, diverting the worst of the pain, shoring up torn tissue. He still hurt, but he could survive it.Thwack!The second lash landed just below the first. Fresh fire exploded across his b
BENEATH THE WHIP
CHAPTER 009The pain was quiet, deep, and relentless. It felt like molten glass twisting through the wreckage of his chest, threading through pathways Kieran thought were gone forever. The System didn’t heal gently it worked like a cold, precise machine, forcing the 324 units of Essence through him as if repairing a shattered pipeline.Time lost all meaning. There was only the grinding ache inside him and the damp chill of the stone floor seeping into his bones.A faint ping in his mind marked the progress:[Allocation complete. Meridian Cluster ‘Lesser Heart’ 23% restored. Basic function regained.][Host can now passively absorb ambient spiritual energy at 0.1% efficiency of a 1st Stage Qi Condensation cultivator.]It was pitiful. A trickle where others had rivers. But a trickle was better than the empty desert he’d felt before.He felt it then a tiny pull in the air, almost imagined, drawing the faintest bit of spiritual energy into the repaired meridian. Not enough to really fight
NO ESCAPE ONLY SURVIVAL
CHAPTER 008The sound was wrong. Not wood on metal. A deep, shivering snap rolled through the yard.The oak of Marcus’s training sword splintered, the thin spirit-steel core inside shattered like glass. Kieran’s chaotic Essence had poured into the bar at the exact moment of impact, magnifying the force.Marcus froze. His prized sword the symbol of his skill and status was now nothing but a jagged stump of twisted wood and metal.Silence stretched.Then Marcus’s face darkened. Gone was the mocking cruelty. Replaced by something cold, dangerous, and murderous.“You… you broken piece of nothing…” he hissed, voice low, trembling with rage. “You dare?”He dropped the ruined hilt. He didn’t need it. His hands curled into fists. A pale blue ripple of air shimmered around them, faint but visible. He was calling on his Qi the spiritual energy Kieran had never been able to touch.“I’m going to put you in the ground myself,” Marcus growled, voice low and deadly.This wasn’t just a beating. This
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CHAPTER 007Kieran’s heart leapt. They weren’t done with him yet.The voice came from just outside his row. Torchlight flickered over the walls.He was out of time. He pushed himself up. His body moved with a new, fluid strength. Four hundred eleven units of Essence hadn’t turned him into a master cultivator, but it had made his broken body faster, tougher, sharper.A custodial worker rounded the corner, torch in hand. Kieran didn’t think. He acted. He grabbed a handful of loose hay from the floor and flung it into the man’s face.“Argh! He’s here!” the worker yelled, coughing and swiping at the straw.Kieran didn’t stop. He darted down the narrow alley between the sheds, his legs pumping, his lungs burning. He didn’t know where he was going he only knew he had to put distance between himself and the stolen core.He burst into a wide service yard and skidded to a halt.Standing there in the moonlight wasn’t a worker or a handler.It was Marcus.Kieran froze. Marcus’s robes were clean
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