2025-12-11 23:05:53CHAPTER 008
The sound was wrong. Not wood on metal. A deep, shivering snap rolled through the yard.The oak of Marcus’s training sword splintered, the thin spirit-steel core inside shattered like glass. Kieran’s chaotic Essence had poured into the bar at the exact moment of impact, magnifying the force.
Marcus froze. His prized sword the symbol of his skill and status was now nothing but a jagged stump of twisted wood and metal.
Silence stretched.
Then Marcus’s face darkened. Gone was the mocking cruelty. Replaced by something cold, dangerous, and murderous.
“You… you broken piece of nothing…” he hissed, voice low, trembling with rage. “You dare?”
He dropped the ruined hilt. He didn’t need it. His hands curled into fists. A pale blue ripple of air shimmered around them, faint but visible. He was calling on his Qi the spiritual energy Kieran had never been able to touch.
“I’m going to put you in the ground myself,” Marcus growled, voice low and deadly.
This wasn’t just a beating. This was execution. His Qi could tear Kieran’s already-broken body apart from the inside.
Kieran scrambled back, the steel bar suddenly feeling useless. His System flashed red:
[LETHAL THREAT DETECTED: Qi Condensation (2nd Stage) combatant. Host defenses ineffective. Evasion probability: 12%.]
Marcus stepped closer, the air around his fists humming. “No more tricks. No more running.”
Then a sharp voice cut through the tension.
“HALT! What is the meaning of this?”
Elder Garth, sour-faced supervisor of the Custodial Quarter, appeared at the yard entrance. Two other overseers flanked him, lanterns glowing. His eyes swept over the scene: the panting, mud-smeared custodian, the furious disciple, and the shattered pieces of Marcus’s training sword.
Marcus froze. The Qi around his fists flickered and faded. He straightened, forcing a mask of indignation. “Elder! This… servant attacked me, destroyed my training sword, and tried to escape after stealing!”
Garth’s gaze snapped to Kieran, still panting on the ground. “You. Stand.”
Kieran got up slowly, muscles screaming. The steel bar slipped from his hands with a clatter.
“Is this true?” Garth demanded.
“He attacked me first,” Kieran said, voice rough. “I was only trying to avoid him. The sword broke when he struck at me.”
“Lies!” Marcus spat. “He’s the thief! Search him! He must be carrying the stolen core!”
Garth nodded to one of the overseers, who stepped forward and roughly patted Kieran down. Only dirt and torn rags came out.
“No core, Elder,” the overseer said.
Marcus’s confidence wavered. “He… he must have hidden it!”
“Enough,” Garth said, voice heavy with weariness. He looked at the broken sword, then at Kieran with clear contempt. “A disciple’s weapon is destroyed.
A custodian is found in a restricted area during an alarm. Theft or not, this is gross negligence and insolence.” He turned to Marcus. “You may file a formal complaint. This… waste of skin will be disciplined.”
Marcus leaned in close as the overseers grabbed Kieran’s arms. His breath was hot against Kieran’s ear. “A formal complaint means the Discipline Hall,” he hissed. “No wooden swords there, cripple. Whips lined with spirit-thorns. Salt in your wounds. You’ll feel every second of your miserable life leaving you.”
Kieran’s blood ran cold.
Garth gestured to the overseers. “Take him to the holding cell. At dawn, he faces the Hall Master for theft, destruction of sect property, and assault on a disciple.”
As they dragged him away, Kieran met Marcus’s eyes. The cruel satisfaction there was a promise: more pain was coming.
The holding cell was a dark, damp hole carved into the Custodial Hall’s rocky foundation. It smelled of mildew and fear. They shoved him in and slammed the iron door shut.
Alone in the pitch-black cell, the adrenaline drained away. His ribs throbbed, the lynx’s grief still gnawed at his soul, and the thought of the Discipline Hall twisted his stomach into a cold knot.
He had 324 units of Essence now more than ever. Stronger. Faster. But utterly trapped.
[Analysis: Door is plain iron. Physical containment only. Host strength enhanced.]
Maybe he could break the door? He pressed his hands against the cold iron in his mind, imagining the weight of it giving way. Maybe… but then what? Every sect disciple and overseer would hunt him. A fugitive inside the walls.
[Alternative: Use remaining Essence to repair meridians. Target: restore minimal Qi flow in one cluster before dawn.]
The System’s idea was insane. Repair took hours. He had maybe one.
[Probability of partial repair before discipline: 41%. Could allow passive Qi absorption more pain tolerance, slightly stronger.]
It wasn’t escape. It was survival. A small chance to not get shredded under the spirit-thorn whip.
It was all he had.
Kieran sank to the cold stone floor, closing his eyes. His ribs burned, his chest ached, fear pressed at him like water.
“Do it,” he whispered into the dark. “Use it all. Fix something… anything.”
[Directive confirmed. Allocating 324 units of Primordial Essence to targeted meridian repair.]
A new kind of pain rose inside him slow, grinding, not the sharp sting of a hit, but the deep ache of broken pathways being forced back together.
The air around him seemed to hum, a faint pull of energy. One shattered meridian in his chest began reconnecting, bit by bit, powered by the wild, raw force of his Essence.
“This… this has to work,” Kieran whispered, teeth gritted, sweat dripping down his face.
It was a desperate gamble in the dark. By the first light of dawn, he would either be a broken man dragged to the Discipline Hall… or something stronger than anyone expected.
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