
The chains bit into my wrists before I even opened my eyes. Cold iron, blessed by mages and blazing with their power. The metal was a constant reminder of what I was. What I would always be.
Hollowborn.
I forced my eyes open and immediately wished I hadn't. The Plaza of Ascension stretched before me, packed with thousands of people. All of them were here to watch children become something more. Something I could never be.
Above the plaza, the five floating cities hung in the sky like impossible dreams. Skyreach directly overhead, the capital where the Council ruled.
To the east, Windshear with its glass towers catching the morning light. West sat Ironhold, dark and industrial. North was Crystalmere, shining with scholarly magic. And south, Goldspire, where the merchant families kept their wealth.
Each city floated miles above the ground, held aloft by massive Vire Cores. Crystallized magic so powerful they could lift entire mountains. Up there, mages lived in luxury. Down here, people like me survived in their shadow.
"Next group, prepare yourselves," a voice boomed across the plaza.
I shifted my weight, and the chains rattled. Two enforcers stood on either side of me, their silver armor marking them as Blaze rank. Fourth rank mages. Elite soldiers who could each hold twenty spells in their cultivation base without breaking a sweat.
I could hold zero. That was what made someone Hollowborn. We were stuck at Dormant rank forever. No Vire channels in our bodies to let magic flow. No capacity to cultivate power. We were born broken, and the Three Laws made sure we stayed at the bottom.
The First Law: Restraint. All Hollowborns must be chained during public magic ceremonies.
The Second Law: Separation. Hollowborns cannot live in floating cities.
The Third Law: Disposal. Hollowborns who cause magical disturbances must be removed from society.
Simple. Clean and Brutal.
"Kael." My mother's voice came from somewhere in the crowd. I couldn't see her, but I knew she was there. She always came, even when I begged her not to. "Remember what I told you. Late blooming is rare, but it happens. You might still awaken."
Late blooming. The desperate hope of every Hollowborn parent. Sometimes, very rarely, a child who seemed Dormant would suddenly awaken at sixteen during their Ascension Rite. Their Vire channels would open, and they would jump straight to Ember rank or higher.
It happened maybe once every ten years. I didn't believe in miracles. The crystal platform descended from above on beams of pure light. Magister Veyra stood at its center, her robes shimmering with power. She was Inferno rank. Fifth rank. A Council member who could hold fifty spells and level a building with a thought.
In her hands floated the Awakening Crystal. A piece of solidified Vire magic the size of my head, pulsing with inner light. Every color of magic humanity had ever touched swirled inside it.
"The Ascension Rite will now begin," Magister Veyra announced. Her voice carried across the plaza without effort, amplified by magic. "Those who awaken today will learn their rank and capacity. They will begin their journey on the path of cultivation. They will rise."
The crowd cheered. Parents clutched each other. Children in silk robes stepped forward, their faces bright with excitement.
I stood in my corner, alone except for my chains and guards.
"First candidate, approach."
A girl stepped onto the platform. She couldn't have been more than sixteen, her blonde hair tied back with ribbons. Her family's colors marked her as a merchant class. They probably had a cultivation method prepared for her already. Pills and techniques to help her advance quickly through the ranks.
She placed her hand on the crystal. It glowed orange. Warm light spread across the platform. The crystal hummed, and above it, numbers appeared in glowing script.
RANK: EMBER (1ST RANK) VIRE CAPACITY: 150 CHANNELS: OPEN
The crowd applauded politely. Ember was the first real rank. Respectable for a merchant family daughter. She could hold one or two basic spells. With training, she might reach Spark rank by her twenties.
The girl smiled, bowed, and stepped down. Her parents hugged her, tears in their eyes.
"Second candidate."
A boy this time, wearing expensive robes marked with his family seal. Noble class, probably. His chin was raised with confidence as he touched the crystal.
It glowed yellow. The light was brighter this time, more intense. The numbers shifted.
RANK: SPARK (2ND RANK) VIRE CAPACITY: 340 CHANNELS: ENHANCED
The crowd roared. Spark rank at awakening was rare. This boy could hold three to five spells immediately. With his family's resources, he would probably reach Flame rank within a few years. Maybe even Blaze if he was talented enough.
His family was already celebrating, shouting his name. Other nobles congratulated them. A Spark awakening meant their bloodline was strong.
Three more children went. Two Embers and another Spark. Each time, the crowd celebrated. Each time, the crystal measured their worth in cold, precise numbers.
Then came the girl who changed everything. She was tiny, maybe only fifteen, with dark skin and nervous hands. I didn't recognize her family colors, so probably lower merchant class. She approached the crystal slowly, like it might bite her.
"Don't be afraid," Magister Veyra said. "The crystal only reveals what is already inside you."
The girl touched it. The crystal exploded with red light. Everyone went silent. Red light meant Flame rank. Third rank. The kind of awakening that happened maybe once a year across all five cities.
The numbers appeared, but they were bigger this time.
RANK: FLAME (3RD RANK) VIRE CAPACITY: 820 CHANNELS: SUPERIOR
The plaza erupted in chaos. People screamed in celebration. The girl's family was crying. Guards had to hold back the crowd of nobles trying to reach her, probably to offer marriage contracts or cultivation resources.
Flame rank at awakening meant she could hold six to ten spells. She would be fast-tracked to the Academy. Given the best teachers. She might reach Blaze rank by twenty-five. Maybe even Inferno before she died.
She was set for life. I watched her being lifted onto the shoulders of her family, and something bitter twisted in my chest. She was younger than me. Probably weaker physically. Definitely less experienced with pain.
But she would live in the sky while I rotted below.
"Hollowborn candidate," Magister Veyra's voice cut through the celebration. "Approach."
The crowd fell silent again. But this silence was different. Colder. The enforcers grabbed my arms and dragged me toward the platform. My feet scraped against the stone. People backed away, creating a circle of empty space around me.
Just in case the Hollowborn did something wrong. The platform lifted me up. Magister Veyra looked at me with the same expression she would give a dead rat.
"Name."
"Kael Veyrin." My voice came out steady. I wouldn't give them fear.
"You understand this is a formality," she said quietly, so only I could hear. "Hollowborns don't awaken. Your channels are sealed. Dead. This ritual is just proof of what you are."
"Then why do it?"
"Because the law requires it." She gestured to the crystal. "Touch it. Confirm your Dormant status. Then we will send you back where you belong."
I looked at the crystal. At the swirling colors inside it. At the magic I would never touch.
"Kael!" My mother's voice rang out. "Late blooming! Remember!"
I heard the hope in her voice. The desperate, foolish hope that I might be different.
I wasn't. But I reached out anyway. My fingers brushed the crystal's surface. For a moment, nothing happened. Then pain exploded through my arm.
Not the gentle warmth others had described. Not the comfortable flow of magic awakening. This was agony. Like every nerve in my body had been set on fire.
The crystal blazed white. So bright I couldn't see. So bright people screamed and covered their eyes.
Heat washed over the platform. I felt the crystal pulling at something inside me. No, not pulling. I was pulling at it. Dragging power out of it like water from a well.
Too much power. The crystal cracked.
"Impossible," Magister Veyra breathed.
I tried to let go, but my hand was locked to the crystal. The white light grew brighter. Hotter. The numbers that appeared above the crystal flickered wildly.
RANK: ERROR VIRE CAPACITY: UNMEASURABLE CHANNELS: ERROR WARNING: CRITICAL OVERLOAD
"Get back!" someone screamed.
The crystal shattered. Pieces exploded outward like deadly stars. I felt them slice my face, my arms, my chest. Blood ran hot. The platform lurched. Alarms blared across all five cities.
I fell backward, my chains snapping tight, and watched the broken pieces of the Awakening Crystal rain down on the screaming crowd.
Magister Veyra threw up a shield of golden light, but I was too close. Crystal shards had already cut me open in a dozen places.
"Void-Tainted!" Her voice boomed across the plaza, amplified to reach every ear. "The Hollowborn is Void-Tainted! He breaks magical artifacts! Evacuate immediately!"
Panic erupted. Thousands of people surged toward the exits, trampling each other to get away from me.
"I didn't do anything!" I shouted.
But no one was listening.
More enforcers poured onto the platform, surrounding me with spears of hardened light.
"Kael!" My mother broke through the crowd, running toward me. Her face was pale, tears streaming. "Let him go! He's just a boy!"
An enforcer stepped into her path.
"Stand back, citizen."
"He's my son!"
"Stand back, or be restrained."
She tried to push past him. His gauntlet crashed into her face. My mother fell like a puppet with cut strings.
"NO!" I lunged forward, but the chains held. The enforcers closed in, their weapons pointed at my throat.
"The subject is violent," one of them said calmly into a communication crystal. "Confirming Void-Taint status. Recommend immediate disposal under the Third Law."
"Disposal approved," a voice crackled back.
They unlocked my chains from the platform but kept my wrists bound. Black-armored guards descended from above. Sky Guard. The elite enforcers who handled problems the regular soldiers couldn't.
One of them grabbed my face, forcing me to look at him.
"You're a mistake," he said quietly. "Mistakes get corrected."
They lifted into the air, and I was dragged up with them, dangling between two soldiers.
Below, my mother wasn't moving. Someone was checking her pulse, but I couldn't tell if she was alive.
We rose higher. Past the merchant districts. Past the noble platforms. All the way up to where the city's belly was visible, the massive supports and Vire Cores that kept everything floating.
Then they stopped.
"Any last words?"
I spat blood at him.
He smiled. "Didn't think so."
They let go and I fell down, down…..
Wind screamed past my ears. The ground rushed up, a dark blur growing larger every second. This was the Undercleft. The wasteland beneath the cities where garbage and corpses went to rot.
I was going to die. I closed my eyes and waited for impact. It came like a hammer.
Every bone in my body screamed. Air exploded from my lungs. Pain radiating through me so intense that I couldn't even scream.
But I was alive. Somehow, impossibly, I was alive. I lay there, staring up at the five glowing cities so far above me. So beautiful. So unreachable.
Something dug into my back. I rolled over with a groan and looked down. A corpse.
A mage's corpse, judging by the tattered robes. Dead for weeks, maybe months. The flesh was mostly gone, leaving bone and dried leather. But on its skeletal fingers, I saw three rings still glowing faintly with residual magic.
My blood, running from a dozen cuts, dripped onto the corpse's hand. The rings flared bright.
Then something happened in my vision. Words appeared. Glowing. Floating in the air like they were written on reality itself.
[UNKNOWN ENTITY DETECTED]
I blinked. The words stayed.
[ANALYZING...]
A pulse of energy ran through me, starting where my blood touched the corpse and spreading through my entire body.
[REVERTER BLOODLINE CONFIRMED]
My breath caught.
[INTEGRATION: 1%]
The words faded slowly, leaving me alone in the darkness with a dead mage and questions I couldn't answer.
What was a Reverter?
What did integration mean?
And why could I see words that shouldn't exist?
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