Kael's POV
Dawn came too early and too cold. I arrived at Garrick's training yard with muscles already sore from yesterday's journey and a stomach growling from the meager breakfast my father and I had shared. The gate stood open, and inside, students were already warming up, running laps, stretching, practicing forms with a casual competence that made my inadequacy painfully obvious. Garrick stood at the center like a monument to violence. He didn't acknowledge my arrival, didn't offer any greeting. Just pointed to the far corner of the yard. "Run. Twenty laps around the perimeter. Go." I ran. Or tried to. By the third lap, my lungs burned. By the seventh, my legs felt like lead. By the twelfth, I was stumbling more than running. The other students flowed past me with ease, some of them laughing at my pathetic pace. "Faster!" Garrick's voice cracked like a whip. "You think monsters will wait for you to catch your breath? Move!" I pushed harder, but my body refused to cooperate. On the fifteenth lap, I collapsed, gasping, tasting copper in my mouth. Garrick loomed over me. "Already done?" "Can't... breathe..." "Then die. Because that's what happens to people who give up." He nudged me with his boot, not gently. "Get up." "I can't…" "You can, or you can quit and prove everyone right about Errors being worthless." His voice held no sympathy, no encouragement. Just cold fact. "Your choice." Rage flared in my chest, hot enough to burn through the exhaustion. I forced myself to my knees, then my feet. My legs shook violently, but I started running again. Lap sixteen. Seventeen. Eighteen. My vision narrowed to a tunnel. The world became nothing but the next step, the next breath, the next moment of refusing to fall. Nineteen. Twenty. I crossed the finish line and immediately vomited into the dirt. My entire body trembled uncontrollably. Black spots danced across my vision. "Acceptable," Garrick said. "Now do fifty push-ups." The morning continued in that brutal fashion. Every exercise pushed me past what I thought possible. Every drill exposed my weakness. And through it all, Garrick showed no mercy, offered no praise, gave no indication that I was doing anything other than barely surviving. The other students kept their distance, but I felt their eyes on me constantly. The Error. The boy with no destiny trying to pretend he could be strong. During the midday break, I sat alone under a tree, too exhausted to eat the bread my father had packed. That's when the golden-haired boy approached. "You're tougher than you look," he said, sitting down uninvited. "Most people quit on their first day with Garrick." I managed to turn my head to look at him. Up close, his features were almost too perfect, like someone had drawn the ideal hero and brought the sketch to life. "Haven't quit yet." "Key word being 'yet.'" He grinned, but it wasn't mean-spirited. "I'm Aldric. Aldric Silvermane." Even the name sounded heroic. "Kael Ardent." "I know. Everyone knows." He offered me his water flask. "The Error who came to learn to fight. People are taking bets on how long you'll last." I took the flask gratefully, too thirsty to let pride refuse. "What's your bet?" "That you'll surprise them." Aldric leaned back against the tree. "I saw you finish those laps. You were dying, but you didn't stop. That takes something Scripts can't give you." "What's your Script?" I asked, curious despite myself. His expression shifted, becoming almost embarrassed. "The Script of Ultimate Victory. I'm supposed to become the greatest hero of my generation, defeat the Demon Lord, bring an age of peace, all that prophesied nonsense." I stared at him. The Script of Ultimate Victory was legendary, only granted once every few centuries to individuals destined to change the world itself. This boy sitting beside me, sharing his water and talking like we were normal children, was marked by the gods themselves for greatness. "That's... impressive." "That's terrifying," he corrected. "Do you know what it's like having everyone expect you to be perfect? Having your entire life planned out before you've even lived it?" He picked at the grass between his feet. "At least you get to decide who you become." The irony was almost funny. He envied my freedom while I envied his purpose. "Why are you being nice to me?" I asked bluntly. "Everyone else treats me like I'm diseased." Aldric shrugged. "My Script says I'll face the greatest evil ever known and barely survive. If that's my destiny, I figure I should learn to judge people by their actions, not their fate. Otherwise, I might mistake an ally for an enemy when it matters most." There was wisdom in that, the kind that seemed unusual for an eight-year-old boy. Then again, maybe his Script gave him insights beyond his years. "Thank you," I said quietly. "For the water. And for talking to me." "Don't thank me yet. Garrick's afternoon sessions are worse." Aldric stood and offered his hand. "Come on. Break's almost over." I let him pull me to my feet, and together we walked back to the training yard. For the first time since the Ceremony, I felt something other than isolation. I felt hope. The afternoon proved Aldric right, it was worse. Garrick paired us for combat drills, and I learned very quickly that knowing sword forms intellectually was vastly different from executing them against an opponent. Even the youngest students disarmed me effortlessly. My wooden practice sword felt awkward and heavy, and my movements were clumsy compared to their Script-enhanced grace. "Again," Garrick commanded after my fifth consecutive defeat. "And this time, stop thinking. Your mind is too slow. React." My next opponent was a girl about ten years old with the Script of the Swift Strike. She came at me like lightning, and I barely saw her move before my practice sword went flying. "Pathetic," Garrick said. "You're not reacting, you're panicking. Clear your mind." How was I supposed to clear my mind when fear screamed that I was inadequate, worthless, exactly what everyone said I was? The girl attacked again. This time, something shifted. Maybe it was exhaustion shutting down my conscious thought. Maybe it was desperation overriding fear. But for just one moment, I didn't think, I moved. My sword met hers with a solid crack. It wasn't a perfect parry, but it was a parry. I'd actually blocked her strike. The shock on her face matched the shock I felt. "Better," Garrick said. His tone hadn't changed, but somehow that single word felt like the highest praise I'd ever received. "Again." We drilled until sunset painted the sky orange and red. Every muscle in my body screamed. My hands bled from gripping the practice sword wrong. My shins were bruised from failed footwork. But I'd managed three successful parries by the end, and once, I'd even landed a strike of my own. When Garrick finally dismissed us, I could barely walk. Aldric appeared at my elbow, supporting me casually as we headed toward the gate. "Not bad for a first day," he said. "I lost every single bout." "But you finished. That's what matters." He glanced at me with those unnervingly perceptive blue eyes. "Garrick doesn't waste time on people he doesn't think can improve. The fact that he kept pushing you means he sees potential." I wanted to believe that. Wanted to believe that maybe, somehow, I could become strong enough to matter. My father waited outside the gate, his clothes covered in soot from working at Garrick's forge. His eyes widened at the sight of me, bruised, bleeding, barely standing. "Kael.." "I finished," I said before he could ask. "And I'm coming back tomorrow." Pride and concern warred in his expression, but pride won. "That's my boy." Aldric waved goodbye as my father helped me back toward our boarding house. Behind us, the training yard began to empty, students heading home to families and comfortable beds and the certainty of their Scripts guiding them forward. I had none of that. But I had survived my first day. I had learned something, improved something, proven something, if only to myself. As we walked through Ashenvale's darkening streets, I made a silent promise. I would return tomorrow, and the day after, and the day after that. I would train until I couldn't stand. I would fail and fail and fail until failure taught me how to succeed. Because Aldric was wrong about one thing. I didn't get to decide who I became. The world had already decided I was nothing. But maybe, just maybe, I could prove the world wrong.Latest Chapter
Chapter 31: The Church's Return
Commander Thane arrived at the Academy six weeks into the term, bringing news of another corruption outbreak requiring my deployment.I was summoned to Headmaster Valen's office to receive a briefing, Aldric insisting on accompanying me despite this being Church business rather than Academy matter. The office was impressive, walls lined with portraits of legendary heroes who'd graduated from the Academy, their Scripts manifesting as subtle glows around painted figures.Thane stood beside the Headmaster's desk, his expression carrying the clinical focus I'd learned to associate with deployment orders. "Error. Good. We have a situation that requires immediate response.""What kind of situation?" I asked, the void already anticipating what came next."Corruption outbreak in the eastern mining districts. Not as extensive as Millbrook but concentrated in a small area, approximately twelve confirmed cases of Script inversion. Standard containment isn't working, and the corruption is spreadi
Chapter 30: The Breaking Point
Sera's training session proved more revealing than I'd anticipated, though not in ways she intended. We met in a private practice ring at dusk, when most students were at dinner and observation would be minimal. She arrived wearing combat practice gear, her Unbreakable Will Script marks glowing faintly on her arms, radiating the kind of confidence that came from knowing destiny favored you absolutely. "I expect professional instruction," she said immediately, not bothering with pleasantries. "No holding back because I'm nobility or female or Script blessed. If I'm paying for your time with official requisition, I expect full value." "You'll get exactly what you need, which isn't necessarily what you want." I selected practice weapons, tossing her a standard blade. "Your problem is that Unbreakable Will makes you rigid. You believe your destiny means you can't be broken, so you don't learn to bend. When someone applies enough pressure in unexpected ways, you shatter instead of flexin
Chapter 29: The Forbidden Partnership
News of my sparring effectiveness spread through the first year class over the following weeks, bringing steady requests from students struggling with their Script development.Garrett returned regularly, his Rising Flame Script finally manifesting properly after learning to trust instinct over overthinking. Others followed, students whose destinies required combat competence but whose natural abilities lagged behind Script promises. I worked with them methodically, identifying problems, providing unconventional opposition, helping them develop techniques their Script enhanced instructors couldn't teach.The irony wasn't lost on me. The Error with no destiny was helping the blessed develop theirs, the void assisting fate itself became stronger. But each session also let me study Scripts up close, understand their patterns and structures, feeding knowledge to the hunger growing inside me.I was careful never to pull at their Scripts, never to let the void reach out during sparring sess
Chapter 28: The Consumption Experiment
The knowledge from Scholar Davos's journal consumed my thoughts for days after discovering it, the void humming with possibilities I'd never considered before.I could absorb corruption because corruption was broken destiny, inverted Scripts that had nowhere else to go. But what about intact Scripts? What about the pure fate energy radiating from every blessed student walking through the Academy? Could I pull that in too, consume destinies themselves rather than just their corrupted remnants?The hunger grew stronger daily, the void stretching toward Script bearers with intensity I struggled to suppress. During combat practice, during weapons maintenance, during sparring sessions, I felt it reaching toward the fate energy surrounding me, wanting to test whether Elara's techniques could be replicated.I needed to experiment, but carefully, secretly, in ways that wouldn't immediately alert Professor Thrain or other security focused faculty. The Academy's Script bearers were too valuable
Chapter 27: The Library's Secret
A month into the Academy term, I discovered the restricted section of the library entirely by accident.I'd been sent to retrieve a reference manual Professor Marcus needed for his advanced combat theory class, one of the few errands that took me into academic spaces normally forbidden to attached personnel. The library was massive, five stories of books and scrolls and ancient texts preserved through Script enhanced methods. Students filled the reading areas, studying their destinies and the heroes who'd fulfilled theirs before.I found the manual quickly but took a wrong turn returning, ending up in a hallway I didn't recognize. The architecture changed here, older stone instead of newer construction, dim lighting suggesting these sections saw little traffic. Curiosity, one of the few emotions the void hadn't completely consumed, pulled me deeper.At the hallway's end stood a door marked with Script wards and a sign reading "Restricted Section, Faculty Authorization Required." The w
Chapter 26: The Night-time Visitor
Three weeks into the Academy term, Mira appeared at my window in the dead of night.I woke to the soft scraping of her knife against the lock, a sound so quiet anyone without my constant void enhanced awareness would have missed it completely. She slipped through the window like shadow made flesh, her Script of Silent Blade developing rapidly, turning her into the assassin destiny demanded she become."You shouldn't be here," I said without sitting up, voice flat in the darkness. "If you're caught in attached personnel quarters after hours, you'll face disciplinary action.""Good thing I won't be caught then." She sat on the edge of my narrow bed, close enough that I could see her face in the moonlight streaming through the window. "I came to see if there's anything left of you worth saving, or if the void finally won completely.""The void won the moment I absorbed corruption from forty seven people at Millbrook. This is just delayed recognition of that victory." I sat up, studying h
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