Kael's POV
Ashenvale stank of smoke, sweat, and desperation. We rode through the crooked wooden gate just before sunset, and I got my first real look at what frontier life had to offer. The main street, if you could dignify it by the name, was earth pounded into mud by recent rain. The buildings leaned against each other like drunks, constructed from bits of whatever people had to hand. A forge was burning on the corner, but the blacksmith therein did not look even remotely like my father. The smith lacked three fingers on his left hand and had scars crisscrossing his face like a map of battles. People strode the streets armed, swords, axes, even crude spears. No one smiled. No one looked relaxed. Every face had the same expression: suspicion mixed with exhaustion, the look of people who'd learned that survival meant never dropping one's guard. "Stay close," my father muttered, his hand clenched on my shoulder. We lived in a boarding house maintained by a woman named Martha who did not ask questions and demanded payment in advance. The room was barely large enough for a single bed and a chair, but my father said it would do until he was settled and able to earn enough to pay for a decent workroom. That night, lying on the floor while my father took the bed, he'd insisted despite my protests, I listened to the sounds of Ashenvale. Shouting from a tavern three buildings down. The clang of metal on metal as the night watch changed shifts. Something howling in the distance, too close to be comfortable. And underneath it all, a tension that made my skin prickle. This location wasn't secure. However, it was also beyond the immediate reach of the Church, beyond the judgment of people who'd known me before I became an Error. Here, possibly, I might be someone else. Morning came with cruel reality. My father went out during the day to the local forge, talking to merchants, attempting to gain employment. I stayed in our room as I was told, but boredom and curiosity finally got the better of me and I went to the window. That's where I first saw him. A boy, perhaps a year older than me, was in the courtyard below practicing sword drills. His form was clumsy, untaught, but he flung himself into each exercise with a wild enthusiasm. Golden hair shone in the sunlight, and even from my window, I could decipher the intensity of his blue eyes. He practiced for hours upon hours, refusing to rest, refusing to give up even when exhaustion had him staggering. There was something admirable in that, something that drew me in despite my reservations. My father returned that evening, his face grim. "No luck?" I asked. "They all have their connections here already, arrangements, agreements made long before we arrived." He collapsed onto the bed. "But I did hear something that could prove useful. There is a man named Garrick who runs a training yard on the east side of town. He takes students, teaches them combat and survival. It's not inexpensive, but he has a good reputation." "Why are you telling me this?" My father's eyes locked onto mine with an immeasurable look. "Because you need to know how to defend yourself, Kael. I am not going to be here forever. And in neighborhoods like these, being vulnerable will get you killed." "But lessons cost money we don't have." "I'll do it. Whatever it takes." Steel lined his voice. "You're going to learn to fight, to survive, to be strong enough so that no one can say you don't deserve to live." There was something in his tone that tightened my chest. "Father…." "No arguments. Tomorrow, we go to Garrick's yard." I did not argue. What was I supposed to say? That I feared I would fail at this as well? That I feared my Error nature would infect any training I received? That I did not wish him to sacrifice more for a son the universe itself had rejected? Instead, I just nodded and tried to sleep despite the fear churning in my stomach. Garrick's practice yard was a large cleared space fenced in by wood. Inside, perhaps twenty students of various ages practiced a variety of disciplines, swordplay, archery, hand-to-hand combat, formation drills. A number of instructors moved among them, correcting stances and offering advice. The man himself towered in the middle like a fleshed oak tree with scars. Garrick was a giant, a full six and a half feet tall, with arms as wide as tree trunks and a face that looked to have been carved from granite with a blunt chisel. Burn scars disfigured the left side of his neck, and his right eye was milky white from some long-past wound. "You're the blacksmith," he said by way of no introduction when my father was in front of him. "Heard you were looking for work." "I am. But first, I need to get my son into your training program." Garrick's one good eye landed on me, and I was exposed under that gaze. It was like he could look through flesh and bone to whatever passed as my soul. "He's young. Seven?" "Yes." "Most start at ten." Garrick circled me slowly, inspecting. "He's small for his age. Looks weak. No apparent talent." He paused. "Why would I waste my time?" I expected my father to apologize, to plead my case. Instead, he met Garrick's gaze squarely. "Because he has no Script." The training yard went silent. Every student stopped in the middle of his exercise. Every instructor turned toward them. The force of their attention was like a physical weight. Garrick's expression didn't change. "An Error." "Yes." "You know what that means. Scriptbeasts will be drawn to him. Having him here might endanger my other students. The Church might become aware of my yard for harboring him." Garrick crossed his massive arms. "Why would I risk that?" "Because," my father said quietly, "he'll work harder than anyone here. He has to. Anybody with a Script has destiny on their side, they're guaranteed to reach levels of proficiency because it's written in their fate. Kael has no such promises. Anything he learns, any power he gains, will be through pure effort against a universe waiting for him to falter." Garrick examined me for a long time. Then, surprisingly, he smiled. It was not a friendly smile. "You're right about one thing, he'll have to work ten times harder than any Script-blessed student." He crouched to my level. "Boy, if I accept you, I'll push you past every limit. I'll make you bleed, cry, and beg to give up. Your training will be hell itself because anything less would be a death sentence. Can you handle that?" I thought about the Ceremony, the village's rejection, the Scriptbeast that nearly killed me, every instant since I'd learned I was an Error. I thought about my father trading everything he owned to give me a chance. "Yes," I said, and I meant it. "We'll see." Garrick stood. "As for payment, blacksmith, I do need someone to maintain weapons and repair training equipment. Work for me, and the boy trains free. Deal?" My father's relief was tangible. "Deal." "Good. Boy, you start tomorrow at dawn. Be late and I'll assume you changed your mind." Garrick waved an arm to dismiss him. "Back to drills, everyone! You're not here to stare!" As we left the yard, I saw the blond boy from the courtyard openly looking at me with curiosity. When our eyes met, he smiled, not with pity or horror, but with interest. I didn't know his name yet. Didn't know he carried the Hero's Script, that he was destined for greatness while I was destined for nothing. Did not realize then that a decade later, he would plunge a sword into my heart and call it justice. For now, he was just another student at Garrick's yard. Just another boy trying to get stronger. Another piece moving into position in a game we did not know we were playing.Latest Chapter
Chapter 31: The Church's Return
Commander Thane arrived at the Academy six weeks into the term, bringing news of another corruption outbreak requiring my deployment.I was summoned to Headmaster Valen's office to receive a briefing, Aldric insisting on accompanying me despite this being Church business rather than Academy matter. The office was impressive, walls lined with portraits of legendary heroes who'd graduated from the Academy, their Scripts manifesting as subtle glows around painted figures.Thane stood beside the Headmaster's desk, his expression carrying the clinical focus I'd learned to associate with deployment orders. "Error. Good. We have a situation that requires immediate response.""What kind of situation?" I asked, the void already anticipating what came next."Corruption outbreak in the eastern mining districts. Not as extensive as Millbrook but concentrated in a small area, approximately twelve confirmed cases of Script inversion. Standard containment isn't working, and the corruption is spreadi
Chapter 30: The Breaking Point
Sera's training session proved more revealing than I'd anticipated, though not in ways she intended. We met in a private practice ring at dusk, when most students were at dinner and observation would be minimal. She arrived wearing combat practice gear, her Unbreakable Will Script marks glowing faintly on her arms, radiating the kind of confidence that came from knowing destiny favored you absolutely. "I expect professional instruction," she said immediately, not bothering with pleasantries. "No holding back because I'm nobility or female or Script blessed. If I'm paying for your time with official requisition, I expect full value." "You'll get exactly what you need, which isn't necessarily what you want." I selected practice weapons, tossing her a standard blade. "Your problem is that Unbreakable Will makes you rigid. You believe your destiny means you can't be broken, so you don't learn to bend. When someone applies enough pressure in unexpected ways, you shatter instead of flexin
Chapter 29: The Forbidden Partnership
News of my sparring effectiveness spread through the first year class over the following weeks, bringing steady requests from students struggling with their Script development.Garrett returned regularly, his Rising Flame Script finally manifesting properly after learning to trust instinct over overthinking. Others followed, students whose destinies required combat competence but whose natural abilities lagged behind Script promises. I worked with them methodically, identifying problems, providing unconventional opposition, helping them develop techniques their Script enhanced instructors couldn't teach.The irony wasn't lost on me. The Error with no destiny was helping the blessed develop theirs, the void assisting fate itself became stronger. But each session also let me study Scripts up close, understand their patterns and structures, feeding knowledge to the hunger growing inside me.I was careful never to pull at their Scripts, never to let the void reach out during sparring sess
Chapter 28: The Consumption Experiment
The knowledge from Scholar Davos's journal consumed my thoughts for days after discovering it, the void humming with possibilities I'd never considered before.I could absorb corruption because corruption was broken destiny, inverted Scripts that had nowhere else to go. But what about intact Scripts? What about the pure fate energy radiating from every blessed student walking through the Academy? Could I pull that in too, consume destinies themselves rather than just their corrupted remnants?The hunger grew stronger daily, the void stretching toward Script bearers with intensity I struggled to suppress. During combat practice, during weapons maintenance, during sparring sessions, I felt it reaching toward the fate energy surrounding me, wanting to test whether Elara's techniques could be replicated.I needed to experiment, but carefully, secretly, in ways that wouldn't immediately alert Professor Thrain or other security focused faculty. The Academy's Script bearers were too valuable
Chapter 27: The Library's Secret
A month into the Academy term, I discovered the restricted section of the library entirely by accident.I'd been sent to retrieve a reference manual Professor Marcus needed for his advanced combat theory class, one of the few errands that took me into academic spaces normally forbidden to attached personnel. The library was massive, five stories of books and scrolls and ancient texts preserved through Script enhanced methods. Students filled the reading areas, studying their destinies and the heroes who'd fulfilled theirs before.I found the manual quickly but took a wrong turn returning, ending up in a hallway I didn't recognize. The architecture changed here, older stone instead of newer construction, dim lighting suggesting these sections saw little traffic. Curiosity, one of the few emotions the void hadn't completely consumed, pulled me deeper.At the hallway's end stood a door marked with Script wards and a sign reading "Restricted Section, Faculty Authorization Required." The w
Chapter 26: The Night-time Visitor
Three weeks into the Academy term, Mira appeared at my window in the dead of night.I woke to the soft scraping of her knife against the lock, a sound so quiet anyone without my constant void enhanced awareness would have missed it completely. She slipped through the window like shadow made flesh, her Script of Silent Blade developing rapidly, turning her into the assassin destiny demanded she become."You shouldn't be here," I said without sitting up, voice flat in the darkness. "If you're caught in attached personnel quarters after hours, you'll face disciplinary action.""Good thing I won't be caught then." She sat on the edge of my narrow bed, close enough that I could see her face in the moonlight streaming through the window. "I came to see if there's anything left of you worth saving, or if the void finally won completely.""The void won the moment I absorbed corruption from forty seven people at Millbrook. This is just delayed recognition of that victory." I sat up, studying h
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