Kael's POV
Ashenvale stank of smoke, sweat, and desperation. We rode through the crooked wooden gate just before sunset, and I got my first real look at what frontier life had to offer. The main street, if you could dignify it by the name, was earth pounded into mud by recent rain. The buildings leaned against each other like drunks, constructed from bits of whatever people had to hand. A forge was burning on the corner, but the blacksmith therein did not look even remotely like my father. The smith lacked three fingers on his left hand and had scars crisscrossing his face like a map of battles. People strode the streets armed, swords, axes, even crude spears. No one smiled. No one looked relaxed. Every face had the same expression: suspicion mixed with exhaustion, the look of people who'd learned that survival meant never dropping one's guard. "Stay close," my father muttered, his hand clenched on my shoulder. We lived in a boarding house maintained by a woman named Martha who did not ask questions and demanded payment in advance. The room was barely large enough for a single bed and a chair, but my father said it would do until he was settled and able to earn enough to pay for a decent workroom. That night, lying on the floor while my father took the bed, he'd insisted despite my protests, I listened to the sounds of Ashenvale. Shouting from a tavern three buildings down. The clang of metal on metal as the night watch changed shifts. Something howling in the distance, too close to be comfortable. And underneath it all, a tension that made my skin prickle. This location wasn't secure. However, it was also beyond the immediate reach of the Church, beyond the judgment of people who'd known me before I became an Error. Here, possibly, I might be someone else. Morning came with cruel reality. My father went out during the day to the local forge, talking to merchants, attempting to gain employment. I stayed in our room as I was told, but boredom and curiosity finally got the better of me and I went to the window. That's where I first saw him. A boy, perhaps a year older than me, was in the courtyard below practicing sword drills. His form was clumsy, untaught, but he flung himself into each exercise with a wild enthusiasm. Golden hair shone in the sunlight, and even from my window, I could decipher the intensity of his blue eyes. He practiced for hours upon hours, refusing to rest, refusing to give up even when exhaustion had him staggering. There was something admirable in that, something that drew me in despite my reservations. My father returned that evening, his face grim. "No luck?" I asked. "They all have their connections here already, arrangements, agreements made long before we arrived." He collapsed onto the bed. "But I did hear something that could prove useful. There is a man named Garrick who runs a training yard on the east side of town. He takes students, teaches them combat and survival. It's not inexpensive, but he has a good reputation." "Why are you telling me this?" My father's eyes locked onto mine with an immeasurable look. "Because you need to know how to defend yourself, Kael. I am not going to be here forever. And in neighborhoods like these, being vulnerable will get you killed." "But lessons cost money we don't have." "I'll do it. Whatever it takes." Steel lined his voice. "You're going to learn to fight, to survive, to be strong enough so that no one can say you don't deserve to live." There was something in his tone that tightened my chest. "Father…." "No arguments. Tomorrow, we go to Garrick's yard." I did not argue. What was I supposed to say? That I feared I would fail at this as well? That I feared my Error nature would infect any training I received? That I did not wish him to sacrifice more for a son the universe itself had rejected? Instead, I just nodded and tried to sleep despite the fear churning in my stomach. Garrick's practice yard was a large cleared space fenced in by wood. Inside, perhaps twenty students of various ages practiced a variety of disciplines, swordplay, archery, hand-to-hand combat, formation drills. A number of instructors moved among them, correcting stances and offering advice. The man himself towered in the middle like a fleshed oak tree with scars. Garrick was a giant, a full six and a half feet tall, with arms as wide as tree trunks and a face that looked to have been carved from granite with a blunt chisel. Burn scars disfigured the left side of his neck, and his right eye was milky white from some long-past wound. "You're the blacksmith," he said by way of no introduction when my father was in front of him. "Heard you were looking for work." "I am. But first, I need to get my son into your training program." Garrick's one good eye landed on me, and I was exposed under that gaze. It was like he could look through flesh and bone to whatever passed as my soul. "He's young. Seven?" "Yes." "Most start at ten." Garrick circled me slowly, inspecting. "He's small for his age. Looks weak. No apparent talent." He paused. "Why would I waste my time?" I expected my father to apologize, to plead my case. Instead, he met Garrick's gaze squarely. "Because he has no Script." The training yard went silent. Every student stopped in the middle of his exercise. Every instructor turned toward them. The force of their attention was like a physical weight. Garrick's expression didn't change. "An Error." "Yes." "You know what that means. Scriptbeasts will be drawn to him. Having him here might endanger my other students. The Church might become aware of my yard for harboring him." Garrick crossed his massive arms. "Why would I risk that?" "Because," my father said quietly, "he'll work harder than anyone here. He has to. Anybody with a Script has destiny on their side, they're guaranteed to reach levels of proficiency because it's written in their fate. Kael has no such promises. Anything he learns, any power he gains, will be through pure effort against a universe waiting for him to falter." Garrick examined me for a long time. Then, surprisingly, he smiled. It was not a friendly smile. "You're right about one thing, he'll have to work ten times harder than any Script-blessed student." He crouched to my level. "Boy, if I accept you, I'll push you past every limit. I'll make you bleed, cry, and beg to give up. Your training will be hell itself because anything less would be a death sentence. Can you handle that?" I thought about the Ceremony, the village's rejection, the Scriptbeast that nearly killed me, every instant since I'd learned I was an Error. I thought about my father trading everything he owned to give me a chance. "Yes," I said, and I meant it. "We'll see." Garrick stood. "As for payment, blacksmith, I do need someone to maintain weapons and repair training equipment. Work for me, and the boy trains free. Deal?" My father's relief was tangible. "Deal." "Good. Boy, you start tomorrow at dawn. Be late and I'll assume you changed your mind." Garrick waved an arm to dismiss him. "Back to drills, everyone! You're not here to stare!" As we left the yard, I saw the blond boy from the courtyard openly looking at me with curiosity. When our eyes met, he smiled, not with pity or horror, but with interest. I didn't know his name yet. Didn't know he carried the Hero's Script, that he was destined for greatness while I was destined for nothing. Did not realize then that a decade later, he would plunge a sword into my heart and call it justice. For now, he was just another student at Garrick's yard. Just another boy trying to get stronger. Another piece moving into position in a game we did not know we were playing.Latest Chapter
Chapter 10: The First Crack in Fate
Kael's POV Three months into my employment at the Silvermane estate, I began to notice something strange.Small things at first. A training dummy that should have broken under Aldric's strike remained intact. A sparring match where he slipped on wet grass at the exact moment I attacked, giving me an opening I shouldn't have had. A Scripture instructor who arrived late to our lesson, mumbling about unexpected obstacles that delayed him.Nothing dramatic. Nothing that couldn't be explained by coincidence.But I'd lived eight years as an Error, eight years of fate actively working against my existence, and I'd learned to recognize when the universe's attention turned toward someone. These weren't random incidents. They were corrections, adjustments, the Script trying to write reality back toward its intended narrative.The problem was, they were working in my favor.It started making sense during a tactical lesson with Master Chen, the estate's strategy instructor. He was teaching us ab
Chapter 9: Bonds of Convenience
Kael's POV Two weeks went by before I showed up for my first official day as Aldric's practice partner.The Silvermane compound perched atop Ashenvale, a large complex that seemed irretrievably out of place amidst the frontier town's ramshackle structures. High stone walls surrounded manicured gardens, training grounds, and a manor house that might not have been out of place in the capital. Aldric's father had clearly been some kind of fallen nobleman, banished to the frontier for political misdeeds he never discussed.Gate guards checked my documents, official records indicating that I worked for House Silvermane, before letting me in. I felt their eyes on my back as I passed, aggressive and resentful. Everyone knew what I was now. The Error who'd lived through Scriptbeast mauling by sheer dumb chance and a Hero's intervention.Aldric greeted me in the central training area, far too lively for the early morning. Behind him, standing with stern evaluation, was a man who could only be
Chapter 8: The Cost of Existence
Kael's POV I woke three days later in a room I didn't recognize.Sunlight streamed through a window, painfully bright after the darkness I'd been floating in. My entire body felt like one massive bruise, and when I tried to move my left arm, white-hot agony shot through me so intensely I gasped."Don't move, you idiot." My father's voice, rough with exhaustion and relief.I turned my head, slowly, and saw him sitting in a chair beside the bed. He looked terrible. His eyes were red-rimmed, his face unshaven, his clothes rumpled like he'd been wearing them for days. Which, I realized, he probably had been."Father…""You nearly died." His voice cracked. "The healer said if Aldric had found you five minutes later, you would have bled out in those woods."Memory returned in fragmented pieces. The Scriptbeasts. The fight. Aldric's golden sword cutting through shadow."Where am I?""The healer's house. Garrick paid for your treatment." My father leaned forward, taking my good hand in both
Chapter 7: Shadows in the Woods
Kael's POV The Scriptbeast attack came on a cold autumn evening, two weeks after my victory against Marcus.I was returning from the training yard alone, my father had been called to repair a merchant's wagon wheel and wouldn't finish until late. The path between Garrick's yard and our boarding house cut through a section of forest that most people avoided after dark, but I'd walked it dozens of times without incident. Foolishly, I'd grown complacent.The first warning was the silence. Birds that had been chattering moments before went quiet. The usual rustle of small animals in the underbrush ceased completely. Even the wind seemed to hold its breath.I stopped walking, hand instinctively moving to the practice sword I always carried now. My heart hammered against my ribs as I scanned the darkening trees.Then I saw the eyes.Purple. Glowing. Hungry.Three Scriptbeasts emerged from the shadows, wolves corrupted by unraveling fate magic, their fur matted with something that looked li
Chapter 6: The Cost of Progress
Kael's POV Six months passed in a blur of pain, progress, and few victories.I woke up at dawn every day, ran to training ground on legs that never ceased to ache and stretched my body to its limit. Garrick was never kind to me, if anything, he seemed to find new ways to torment me in specific. While other students were doing standard drills, I was made to bear weights, to dash through barriers, endurance exercises that left me gasping on the ground."Screens provide individuals with shortcuts," he had once told me, standing over me as I grunted my way through my hundredth push-up. "They strengthen the body naturally, make skills more accessible, make things improve faster. You don't have shortcuts. So you'll use the long path, and you'll follow it until your feet are bleeding."They did bleed. Regularly.But something was shifting. Gradually, almost unnoticeably at first, then more and more noticeably, my body was changing. Muscles were growing where there hadn't been any before. My
Chapter 6: The Cost of Progress
Kael's POV Six months passed in a blur of pain, progress, and few victories.I woke up at dawn every day, ran to training ground on legs that never ceased to ache and stretched my body to its limit. Garrick was never kind to me, if anything, he seemed to find new ways to torment me in specific. While other students were doing standard drills, I was made to bear weights, to dash through barriers, endurance exercises that left me gasping on the ground."Screens provide individuals with shortcuts," he had once told me, standing over me as I grunted my way through my hundredth push-up. "They strengthen the body naturally, make skills more accessible, make things improve faster. You don't have shortcuts. So you'll use the long path, and you'll follow it until your feet are bleeding."They did bleed. Regularly.But something was shifting. Gradually, almost unnoticeably at first, then more and more noticeably, my body was changing. Muscles were growing where there hadn't been any before. My
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