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Chapter 8: When the World Learns Who You Are
Author: Okoye
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The ballroom smelled like fear. Not metaphorical fear. Real fear, sharp, metallic, crawling into the lungs. Paramedics rushed in, voices overlapping. “Clear the area!”

“Pulse is weak!”

“Move!”

Hawthorne’s body lay on the marble floor, suit rumpled, dignity erased. Moments ago, he had been untouchable. Now, people stepped around him like inconvenient furniture.

Cameras didn’t stop recording. They never did. Sophie stood frozen, phone slipping from her fingers. “Uncle…” she whispered. “Wake up.”

No response. Derrick didn’t move. Didn’t speak. Didn’t kneel this time. The system pulsed gently, like a satisfied heartbeat. ''Ascension state stabilized.''

Luna was already gone. That fact hurt more than the screaming. Agent Mercer pushed through the crowd, eyes locking onto Derrick instantly. “Wallance,” she said sharply. “Don’t move.”

Derrick looked at her. For the first time, she flinched. “Am I under arrest?” Derrick asked calmly.

Mercer hesitated. “You were involved in”

“In a man kneeling?” Derrick interrupted. “Or in him dying from a heart attack?”

Murmurs spread. “Heart attack?”

“Did he kill him?”

Sophie rounded on Derrick, eyes wild. “You did this!”

Derrick tilted his head. “Did I touch him?”

“You humiliated him!” she screamed. “You destroyed him in front of everyone!”

The system chimed softly. ''Humiliation acknowledged as non-lethal influence.''

Mercer frowned. “What did you just say?”

Derrick smiled faintly. “Nothing you can charge me with.”

She clenched her jaw. “You think this ends here?”

“No,” Derrick replied. “I think this begins now.”

The screens flickered. Every screen. Phones, tablets, wall displays. A blue interface overrode them all. Gasps filled the room. “GLOBAL BROADCAST AUTHORIZATION GRANTED.”

Mercer spun. “Who did that?!”

Derrick stared at the interface. “System,” he said internally. “What are you doing?”

''Reputation consolidation phase initiated.''

The screen shifted. A title appeared. DERRICK WALLANCE, PROFILE SUMMARY

The crowd went silent. “This is illegal,” Mercer said.

The system continued anyway. “Subject history loading.”

Images appeared. Derrick delivering groceries. Derrick working night shifts. Derrick kneeling in Hawthorne’s office. Laughter began again, nervous, cruel. “So he really was nothing.”

“A joke with money.”

Then, The feed changed. Hospital footage. A timestamp. A nurse arguing with a clerk. “We can’t proceed without authorization.”

The authorization denial flashed. Then Hawthorne’s override. Then the cancellation. Then a flatline monitor. The ballroom went dead silent.

A woman whispered, “They let him die.”

The system’s voice echoed. “CAUSE OF FIRST LOSS CONFIRMED.”

Sophie shook her head violently. “No. This isn’t”

Another screen appeared. SYSTEM SELECTION LOG

CANDIDATE POOL: 47,219, QUALIFICATION FILTER: EXTREME HUMILIATION + IRREVERSIBLE LOSS

People stared. “Candidate… pool?”

“What is this?”

Mercer whispered, “Oh my God…”

The system continued. “HOST WAS NOT CHOSEN AT RANDOM.”

Derrick’s heart pounded. “What do you mean?” he asked internally.

The system didn’t answer him. It answered everyone. “HOST WAS OBSERVED FOR 7 YEARS.”

Gasps erupted. Seven years. That meant, Before Sophie. Before Hawthorne. Before the accident. The screen shifted again.

A younger Derrick, standing outside a factory, A blue interface flickering briefly in front of him. Then disappearing. “FIRST CONTACT ATTEMPT FAILED.”

Derrick’s breath caught. He remembered. He had thought it was exhaustion. Hallucination. “Why?” Derrick whispered.

The system displayed the answer. REJECTION REASON: EMOTIONAL ATTACHMENT TOO STRONG

The image froze on one frame. Derrick smiling. An arm around a younger boy. His brother. The room erupted. “So they waited?”

“They needed him broken.”

Luna’s words echoed in Derrick’s mind. You’re not human anymore.

Sophie collapsed into a chair. “You’re saying… this thing waited until my uncle”

“UNTIL HOST WAS EMPTY.”

Mercer snapped, “Shut it down!”

She reached for her device. It sparked. Dead. Every device in the room followed. The system spoke again. “PUBLIC HUMILIATION ACHIEVES MAXIMUM COMPLIANCE.”

A man shouted, “Turn it off!”

Another screamed, “This is evil!”

Derrick stepped forward. “Stop,” he said.

The system paused. Everyone looked at him. “You’re afraid,” Derrick said to the crowd. “Because you see yourselves.”

Silence. “You humiliated others,” he continued. “You decided worth by money, power, bloodlines.”

He glanced at Hawthorne’s body. “So did I deserve this power?” Derrick asked quietly.

No one answered. The system chimed. ''Host inquiry irrelevant.''

Derrick smiled bitterly. “Figures.”

Sophie stood shakily. “You think exposing this makes you righteous?”

Derrick met her eyes. “No.”

“Then what are you?”

He considered. “A warning.”

The lights flickered again. Red this time. ''EXTERNAL OVERRIDE ATTEMPT DETECTED.''

Mercer’s phone buzzed, somehow alive again. She answered. Her face drained of color. “Yes… Understood.”

She hung up and looked at Derrick. “An international task force is on its way,” she said. “They want the System.”

Derrick nodded. “They always do.”

“You won’t survive this,” Mercer added. “No matter how much money you have.”

Derrick looked at the blue interface hovering calmly. “System,” he asked, “what happens when they take you?”

''Host survival probability: 12%''

“And if I resist?”

''Probability of global destabilization: 61%''

The room held its breath. Derrick laughed softly. “So either I die,” he said, “or the world shakes.”

The system chimed. ''Dominion threshold reached.''

A final screen appeared. NEXT PHASE AVAILABLE: CONTROL - DISTRIBUTION - ERASURE

Sophie whispered, horrified, “What does erasure mean?”

The system answered. “REMOVAL OF INDIVIDUALS FROM ECONOMIC, SOCIAL, AND HISTORICAL RECORD.”

People screamed. “That’s not possible!”

“We’d disappear!”

Derrick stared at the option. His finger hovered. Outside, helicopters thundered closer. Luna’s face flashed in his mind. His brother. The knees on marble. Humiliation. Twice.

The system spoke softly, almost gently. “CHOOSE, HOST.”

Derrick lifted his hand. The screen flickered. And the world waited to see, Who he would erase first.

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