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Chapter 4: Ripples of a Vanished Village
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By the time Sael and Lysara left the council chamber, the city of Gallowmere had begun to stir with unease. Merchants whispered in the market, travelers gaped at the empty road that once led to Ryndale, and rumors spread faster than wildfire: a village had disappeared overnight.

Lysara led Sael through the twisting alleys of the city, her cloak drawn tight against the chill morning air. “They’re already talking,” she muttered, eyes scanning every passerby. “Neighbors. Merchants. Nobles. Anyone who hears about Ryndale will want answers. And when they don’t get them… they’ll want blood.”

Sael’s fingers tightened around the quill hidden in his coat. “I didn’t… I didn’t erase it,” he said quietly. But even as he spoke, a sliver of doubt gnawed at him. The Null Atlas had pulsed violently the moment he traced the river, pulsed almost like it had a mind of its own. Could he really claim innocence when the map itself seemed to act against him?

“You’re the only one it listens to,” Lysara said bluntly. “In the eyes of the world… that makes you guilty.”

Outside the city gates, the first political messengers arrived. Two riders from the kingdom of Arvendral, a land north of Gallowmere, galloped into the square, heralding their presence with brass trumpets. Their leader, a sharp-eyed man in a blue-and-gold tunic, demanded to see the city magistrate, but when he learned the magistrate had gone to the council regarding Ryndale, he demanded someone “responsible.”

Sael froze when he realized the implication. Responsible. That was him.

Lysara nudged him toward the edge of the square. “Don’t make eye contact. Don’t speak unless you have to. They’ll know if you’re involved.”

But it was too late. One of the messengers’ eyes caught Sael’s, lingering a fraction too long. Recognition passed between them, not of Sael himself, but of something in his presence, something unnatural that made the hairs on the back of the messenger’s neck rise.

The day grew hotter, but the tension thickened like a storm cloud. Word had reached Gallowmere’s neighboring city-states: Ryndale had vanished. One lord accused another of foul play. Mercenary bands began gathering on the borders. And above it all, Thalen Drax’s Guild sent emissaries to remind Sael that the Null Atlas did not answer to kingdoms, it answered only to him.

“Do you see it now?” Lysara asked, voice low, as they ducked into a narrow alley. “You hold the power to decide who exists. And everyone wants to use it.”

“I know,” Sael said, voice trembling. He stared at the quill. “I can’t… I can’t make a mistake.”

“You already have,” she said sharply. “Ryndale is gone. Maybe it wasn’t your fault, but the world doesn’t care. People are scared. They’ll blame someone, probably you.”

Sael’s stomach twisted. He could feel the Atlas thrum beneath his coat, warning him, whispering to him, decide. Every instinct screamed: do not draw. Do not touch. You don’t know what will happen.

But the world was already pulling him forward.

By evening, emissaries from three kingdoms had arrived in Gallowmere. Each demanded answers. Each demanded a face to blame. And all of them were strangers to Sael, except through reputation, the rumors of a “mapmaker capable of erasing lands.”

One, a tall woman with silver hair and green eyes from the kingdom of Velaryon, stepped forward. Her voice was calm, deceptively gentle. “I have heard… a village disappeared. Ryndale. Tell me it was an accident. Tell me it was a natural disaster. Tell me it was anything but deliberate, and I may leave without bloodshed.”

Sael swallowed hard. “I… I don’t know what happened,” he said, voice barely audible over the murmurs. “I traced a river… that’s all I was doing.”

“Tracing a river?” she said, raising an eyebrow. “And suddenly the village vanished?” Her smile didn’t reach her eyes. “Are you telling me the world itself bends at your hand?”

Sael’s fingers twitched. He wanted to say no. To insist it wasn’t him. But a flicker of doubt, unbidden and terrifying, slithered into his mind. What if it is?

Night fell, and the council chamber summoned him again. Thalen Drax’s eyes were sharper, colder. “You see what you have caused,” the Guildmaster said. “Do you understand the gravity? One village is gone. Borders will shift. Lords will fight. And soon… nations will come knocking.”

“I don’t control it!” Sael said, desperation cracking his voice. “It’s alive! It… it decides!”

Thalen leaned back, fingers steepled. “Then you must learn to decide. Or the world will decide for you. And believe me… the Atlas does not hesitate.”

Lysara’s voice broke in, quiet but hard. “It’s already testing you. It already chooses. And if you don’t act, the first deliberate erasure will happen… whether you want it or not.”

Sael’s stomach clenched. He looked down at the Atlas. The black dot pulsed, faintly glowing now, like a heartbeat that didn’t belong to him. It was alive. Watching. Waiting.

He realized, with a sick certainty, that the Null Atlas was more than a map. It was a judge. And he, reluctant, terrified, inexperienced, was its executioner.

The first ripple of political chaos reached Gallowmere before midnight. Messengers carried word that the northern duchy suspected Arvendral of “removing” Ryndale. Skirmishes erupted on the borders, innocents caught in the crossfire. Each report reached Sael like a blow to the chest. One village’s disappearance, one line of ink… and yet the world already trembled.

He slumped in the council chambers, quill in hand. Lysara crouched beside him. “You have to think, Sael,” she said. “Every line counts. Every mark is a choice. You decide who lives. Who dies. And if you wait too long, someone else will decide for you.”

Sael swallowed. He could feel it, the Atlas pulsing faster, almost impatient. Every fiber of his being screamed not to touch it. And yet… if he didn’t act, the shadow of inaction might cost more lives than he could imagine.

The quill hovered over the parchment. The black dot pulsed brighter. The Null Atlas whispered once more, a soft, terrible voice only he could hear: “Decide. Or watch the world unmake itself.”

Sael’s hand trembled, hovering over the line that could redraw the map, and the world itself.

And in that moment, he realized a truth that chilled him to the bone: this was no longer about villages. Or kingdoms. Or survival. This was about who he was… and whether he could bear the weight of being a god in ink.

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