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Chapter 5: The First Line
Author: Duxtoscrib
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Sael sat alone in the council chamber, the Null Atlas open before him. The air smelled faintly of ink and damp stone, but the weight in the room was heavier than any smell could be. Outside, the city slept, or tried to, but whispers of Ryndale’s disappearance had spread like wildfire. Kingdoms were already sending envoys, spies, and armies toward Gallowmere. Borders were trembling.

The black dot pulsed on the map. Alive. Waiting. Watching.

Lysara’s voice cut through his thoughts, soft but sharp. “You know what this is, don’t you?”

He swallowed hard. “Yes.”

“Then don’t waste time pretending it’s not your responsibility.” She leaned closer, her eyes dark in the flickering candlelight. “If you don’t draw… someone else will. And the consequences will be worse.”

Sael’s hand shook over the quill. Every fiber of his being screamed not to move. He could feel the Atlas pulsing like a heartbeat, each pulse synchronized to the fear tightening in his chest. You decide, it seemed to whisper. Decide, or the world unravels.

He drew a shaky breath and traced a line along the edge of a neighboring duchy, one rumored to be plotting war over the disappearance of Ryndale. As the quill touched the parchment, the Atlas pulsed violently. Mountains shimmered, rivers twisted unnaturally, and for a brief, terrifying moment, Sael felt the weight of every soul in that duchy pressing down on him.

“It’s… alive,” he whispered. “It’s… responding to me.”

Lysara didn’t answer. She watched, silent, her jaw tight. She understood. This was the moment when the Null Atlas would truly test him.

Outside the chamber, the political ramifications began immediately. Envoys from Arvendral clashed with soldiers from Velaryon. Rumors spread that the northern duchy had struck first, claiming that Ryndale’s disappearance was the act of enemy sabotage. Merchants refused to trade across borders. Villagers fled from lands they had inhabited for generations. And yet, no one knew the truth, only that the world was shifting, and someone had caused it.

Sael’s pulse quickened. Every movement of the quill reshaped reality. A forest here, a river there, erased or redrawn at his hand, and every choice meant someone lived, and someone else did not. The Atlas hummed, low and insistent, and he realized the first deliberate erasure was no longer abstract. It was imminent.

He traced a line, slowly this time, connecting a rogue fort near the northern border, a known aggressor, to a blank space on the parchment. The ink glowed, thickening and darkening. And then, as he lifted the quill, a ripple ran through the map.

The world shifted.

In the north, soldiers stumbled through the dust where their fort had once stood. Walls, towers, training grounds, all gone. Their memories blurred; maps recorded it differently, towns erased from existence. Entire villages that depended on the fort for protection found themselves abandoned, their names forgotten, their histories wiped clean. Panic erupted. The northern duchy declared war, not knowing that it had already lost its first strategic stronghold.

Sael’s stomach churned. He had done it. The first deliberate erasure. And yet, he felt no triumph, only the hollow, sickening weight of power he could scarcely comprehend.

Lysara placed a hand on his shoulder. “It’s done,” she said quietly. “And now… the world will notice.”

He nodded, unable to speak. He could feel the Atlas pulsing faster, almost as if it were satisfied, but also demanding more. Each line of ink felt like a heartbeat that didn’t belong to him.

Word of the erasure spread like wildfire. By dawn, messengers from three kingdoms had reached Gallowmere simultaneously, their riders nearly colliding on the city gates. Each brought demands: answers, reparations, and promises of vengeance. Sael and Lysara watched from the council chamber, the Atlas open before them.

“We can’t hide this,” Lysara said. “They’ll see what’s missing. Ryndale, the fort… everything. And they’ll want someone to blame.”

Sael’s hand hovered over the quill. “And that someone… is me,” he whispered.

“Yes,” she said. “And soon, it’ll be more than villages. You’ll have to decide who lives and who dies on a scale you can barely imagine.”

Sael swallowed hard. The Atlas throbbed against his palm. He realized the truth: the first erasure wasn’t just about the fort or the northern duchy. It was about control, power, and survival. Every kingdom would now see him as a weapon, or a threat.

The council entered, their faces masks of concern and calculation. Thalen Drax’s eyes met his. “You understand the consequences,” he said. “Borders will shift. Lords will fight. Nations will rise… and fall. One deliberate erasure, and the world will change forever. Are you prepared for that responsibility, Master Corin?”

Sael nodded slowly. “I… I understand.”

The Atlas pulsed once more, sharp and insistent, like the drumbeat of a war beginning. And for the first time, Sael realized that the Null Atlas was no longer a map. It was a battlefield.

Every line he drew would decide the fate of kingdoms. And every decision carried the weight of death.

Outside, the first skirmishes began. Messengers returned to their lords, townspeople fled, and soldiers scrambled to defend borders that no longer existed as they remembered. The political landscape of the region was shifting violently, irreversibly. And in the council chamber, Sael held the quill over the Atlas once more, knowing that the first deliberate erasure was only the beginning.

The map pulsed again, a heartbeat loud and terrifying. The world waited for his next line. And he could no longer deny it: he was no longer just a mapmaker. He was the hand that shaped existence itself.

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