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Chapter 5 – Hallucination
Author: abundance ke
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Derrick Stones stormed into the Horizon Dynamics office the next morning with a massive bandage on his left temple and murder in his eyes. The blue holographic interface followed him like an unwanted shadow, its countdown ticking silently in the corner of his vision.

Remaining Lifespan: 44 Days

He ignored it.

Hallucination. Brain damage. That’s all this is. Some kind of trauma-induced psychosis. It’ll go away.

The system had other plans.

[Good morning, Host. Ignoring reality will not pause the countdown.]

Derrick nearly tripped over his own feet in the lobby. He glanced around sharply. No one else could see the floating text. Good. The last thing he needed was rumors that the boss had lost his mind.

“Get out of my head,” he muttered under his breath as he marched toward the elevators.

[Negative. The system is now permanently integrated with your consciousness.]

He jabbed the elevator button harder than necessary. Two employees already inside pressed themselves against the walls when they saw him. Their fear, which usually brought him satisfaction, now felt irritating.

As the elevator rose, the countdown suddenly gained an audible tick.

Tick.

Derrick froze. The sound was inside his skull — soft but relentless, like a metronome set to his remaining life.

Tick.

“Shut up,” he growled.

The employees exchanged terrified glances but said nothing.

By the time he reached the twenty-third floor, the entire office had heard about the incident. The whispers were louder today, laced with something new: hope.

“Did you hear? Lena actually hit him.”

“About time someone did.”

“He looked dead on the floor. Maybe karma finally caught up.”

Derrick’s arrival killed the murmurs instantly. He glared at the nearest cluster of employees. “If I hear one more word about last night, you’re all fired. Back to work. Now.”

He stormed into his glass office and slammed the door. The system interface remained, calm and merciless.

[Current Objective: Survive.]

[Suggested Action: Perform one sincere good deed for + time.]

Derrick laughed bitterly and dropped into his chair. “Sincere good deed? I’d rather die.”

[That can be arranged.]

Tick.

The sound was getting louder.

He tried to focus on emails. Quarterly reports. Termination notices he had been planning. But every few seconds, the blue timer pulsed.

43 Days 23 Hours 14 Minutes…

He rubbed his eyes. This couldn’t be real. He had survived the night. The doctors at the ER had been confused — “miraculous recovery” they called it — but Derrick knew better. Or thought he did.

His phone rang. It was HR calling about Lena Brooks.

“Sir, the intern from last night… legal is advising we handle this carefully. She’s considering pressing charges for harassment.”

Derrick’s temper flared. “Fire her immediately. And get security up here. I want her escorted out of the building.”

[Warning: Malicious action detected.]

- 8 Hours

Remaining Lifespan: 43 Days 15 Hours

The deduction hit like a slap. Derrick gripped the edge of his desk. The ticking grew more insistent.

Tick… Tick… Tick…

“Stop it!” he shouted at the empty office.

His secretary poked her head in, looking nervous. “Mr. Stones? Are you okay?”

“Fine!” he snapped. “Get out.”

He spent the next hour trying everything to make the system disappear. He drank water. He splashed cold water on his face in the bathroom. He even muttered half-remembered prayers from childhood. Nothing worked.

The interface simply waited.

By lunch, the ticking had become maddening. Every minute felt heavier. He walked the office floor, looking for someone to vent his frustration on.

He found his target in the marketing area — a junior employee named Jamal who had submitted a campaign idea Derrick hated.

“This is garbage,” Derrick announced loudly, throwing the printed proposal on the desk. “Are you stupid or just lazy? Redo it. And if it’s not better by end of day, you can join the unemployment line.”

Jamal shrank. The office watched in uncomfortable silence.

[Insincere and harmful action.]

- 6 Hours

Remaining Lifespan: 43 Days 9 Hours

Derrick cursed under his breath. The system was relentless.

He retreated to his office again, pacing like a caged animal. The ticking followed.

Tick… Tick… Tick…

In a moment of desperate curiosity, he tested it.

He opened the door and called out to his secretary in the most pleasant voice he could manage. “Could you please bring me a coffee? Thank you.”

The woman looked at him like he had grown a second head. She brought the coffee quickly, hands shaking.

[Fake politeness detected.]

No reward.

Sincerity unchanged: 0.00%

Derrick stared at the notification, then at the coffee. He almost laughed — a dark, unhinged sound.

“This is insane.”

He spent the rest of the afternoon alternating between rage and reluctant fascination. The system didn’t lie. It didn’t negotiate. It simply judged.

And it was winning.

As the clock approached 6 PM, Derrick sat at his desk, staring at the glowing timer.

43 Days 4 Hours 12 Minutes…

Tick… Tick… Tick…

For the first time in his adult life, Derrick Stones felt something dangerously close to fear.

The man who had made everyone else terrified was now running out of time.

And the system was only getting started.

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