Chapter 3. First Warning
Author: Clare Felix
last update2025-09-15 21:00:10

The doubt was a serpent that burrowed deep within the heart of Reuben's new confidence.

By the chill light of the third morning, the System's intervention hardly felt like a miracle but rather a symptom. Psychotic breaks are an elegant, clinical diagnosis. Mid-life crisis, professional despair, loneliness, and stress are a recipe from the textbook for a dissociative episode. The dreamed-up box of ORS packets? Fugue state. He had probably ordered them months ago and simply forgotten, his fractured mind now presenting them as a blessing from above.

He stood before the small, cracked mirror in his office bathroom, studying his own face. The lines around his eyes seemed deeper, the grey at his temples more prominent. He looked like a man who'd seen a ghost. Or a man who was becoming one.

The malaria control effort continued, a tangible connection to reality. On Anna's firm direction, teams had cleared a dozen significant breeding sites. The corner-of-his-eye progress bar—a tool he'd mastered bringing into existence or into oblivion with a mere thought—had inched up to 22%. The estimated outbreak threat had dropped 8%. It was happening. But was the System propelling the progress or simply monitoring it? Was he accrediting a delusion for the results of his own, staunchly rational public health work?

The doubt was paralyzing. He found himself hesitating before he spoke, questioning all his instincts. Was he mad? Was it all some wild fantasy?

The System offered no solace. It was a subdued, inert observer, its face an antiseptic display of data and countdown clocks. The malaria epidemic clock still ticked relentlessly onward: 41:18:04. It didn't care one iota about his existential crisis.

He needed verification. Not the passive, received kind like the ORS packets. He needed to activate the System, running it like any new scientific apparatus. He needed using it to make a prediction and see if it held true.

He sat at his desk, his thoughts rambling over the interface. It was built on a history, a record of its warnings. He focused on the initial one, the cholera alert. The data was still present, stored with cold professionalism.

PATHOGEN: Vibrio cholerae (Serotype O1) SOURCE: Contaminated communal well (Primary), Unhygienic market stall preparation (Secondary)

He'd defused the immediate threat from Kamau, but the origin remained. The well remained contaminated. The filthy market stall remained operational. The System had kept that specific plague in check, but conditions for a repeat were still ripe. It was something he'd been too preoccupied to consider.

He had a fresh, terrible thought. What if the System warnings were not singular events? What if they were frequent? What if it was scanning all the time, and he'd just been ignoring the subsequent warning?

He focused his will, pushing past the top-level menu. Display me threats in real-time. Display me active vectors.

The interface rippled, re-calibrating.

SCANNING.

. ACTIVE PATHOGENIC THREATS IN LOCAL AREA:

1. Vibrio cholerae - SOURCE: Central Well (High Bacterial Load). STATUS: DORMANT (NO CURRENT HOSTS SHEDDING).

2. Plasmodium falciparum - SOURCE: Multiple Vector Breeding Sites. STATUS: INCUBATING (SEE OUTBREAK TIMER).

.

SUBDETECTION: EARLY/ASYMPTOMATIC CARRIERS. SCAN? (COST: 5 DP)

Reuben's breath stopped. A subdetection scan. It would be able to pick up carriers who were not yet symptomatic. It was a deep, cold power. And it cost him. Five of his valuable fifty points.

This was the test. If he spent the points and found nothing, it would show that the System was an illusion, charging him his "points" for a service it could not deliver. If he found something…

He hesitated, his finger hovering over a virtual button. Five points was the price of a half-packet of ORS packets. It was a fortune for an untried hypothesis. But the urge to know, to have evidence beyond dispute, was fierce.

He went through with it.

SUBDETECTION SCAN INITIATED. -5 DP. REMAINING DP: 45. SCANNING 1KM RADIUS.

A second progress bar appeared, filling slowly. There was a funny sensation in Reuben, a faint buzzing at the base of his skull, as if a weightless power was coursing out from his body, pouring through the village. It was over in seconds.

SCAN COMPLETE. RESULTS: 3 ASYMPTOMATIC CARRIERS DETECTED. CARRIER 1: Chijioke Obi (9 yrs, M). LOCATION: Riverside Primary School. CARRIER 2: Nneka Eze (4 yrs, F). LOCATION: Family Compound, Market Quarter. CARRIER 3: Tunde Adebayo (6 yrs, M). LOCATION: Family Compound, Riverside Quarter.

Tunde Adebayo. Kamau's younger brother.

An icy fear, totally unrelated to the System's cold looks, coursed through him. This was no longer a test of theory. This was a fact. There were three human time bombs roaming the village, children who were healthy now but had within themselves a deadly disease, they were spreading bacteria, infecting all they touched. The plague was not over. It was starting all over again.

The System had not erred. He was being given a second chance, a heads up prior to the first fever, prior to the first episode of paralyzing diarrhea. He could stop it before it even began.

The doubt vanished, reduced to ashes by the dictates of the numbers. He was not mad. He was needed.

He grabbed his kit, refilled with the mysterious ORS packets, and strode out of his office. He did not run; running would frighten people. He strode with an intensity he had never known before, a focused determination.

He went to the school first. It was just one long building with a corrugated iron roof, children's voices chanting their times, tables coming out of its open windows. The headmaster, a stern-looking man named Udo, looked surprised to see him.

"Professor Stone? Is everything all right?"

"A routine check, Mr. Udo," Reuben answered, his voice calm, a lie interwoven well with truth. "Following up on the recent. incident. Just want to ensure there aren't any other children ill. May I speak with Chijioke Obi?"

Chijioke was brought out, a spindly boy with wide, questioning eyes. He looked as healthy as could be.

"Hi, Chijioke," Reuben said, kneeling down. "How are you today?"

"Fine, sir," the boy growled.

“No tummy aches? No feeling too warm?”

A slight hesitation. A flicker of uncertainty in the boy’s eyes. “A little… funny. Before breakfast. But I’m fine now.”

Reuben’s heart sank. The earliest, most dismissible symptom. He placed a hand on the boy’s forehead. It was cool. But the System’s scan didn’t measure fever; it measured the presence of the pathogen.

"Maybe it would be better if Chijioke goes with me to the clinic, just in case," Reuben said to the headmaster. "A speedy check-up. Better safe than sorry."

Mr. Udo, not wishing for another crisis on his plate, agreed promptly.

One down.

The Eze compound followed, a dynamic courtyard bounded by smells of food and laughter of children at play. Nneka, a tiny girl with her hair neatly braided, was chasing a chicken. She screamed with joy, her face flushing with exertion, not illness.

Her mother, a woman with a kind but tired face, was skeptical. “Nneka? Sick? Professor, she has the energy of three children. She ate like a horse this morning.”

Reuben persisted, using the same calm, authoritative tone. “It’s probably nothing, Mrs. Eze. But with the recent water issues, we’re being extra vigilant. A quick check at the clinic. It’s better to be sure.”

She handed over her child with reluctance, her face a mixture of worry and confusion.

Two down.

The walk to the Adebayo compound was the longest in his life. He walked with Nneka in his hand and gently led Chijioke by the hand. He felt like the harbinger of doom, collecting his wards. He arrived to see Aisha outside, doing laundry in a large basin. She looked up, her smile losing its place on seeing the children with him, the scowl on his face.

"Professor? Everything… Tunde!" she cried out loudly. "Where is your brother?"

Within a second, Tunde emerged from the house, restless with his eyes. He had a half-chewed piece of sugarcane in his hand.

"Tunde," Reuben asked softly but firmly. "How do you feel?"

The boy shrugged. "Okay."

Aisha's eyes widened, her mind racing with memories of the last few days. "He told me his stomach was… he said it was nothing. A bad mango." She dropped the shirt on the floor, her hands rising to her mouth. "Not again. Please, not again.".

It's okay, Aisha," Reuben told her, exuding calm he did not possess. The System's timer to a new epidemic was probably reset, counting down from a new, heart-stoppingly short figure. "We caught it early. Extremely early. They don't even realize they are ill yet. But we must act now.".

He had all of them. The three symptom-free carriers. He drove them to the clinic, a ghoulish procession. Anna was waiting outside, resting. She watched as he came with his cohort of seemingly well children.

"Reuben? What in the world is this?"

"They're carriers," he whispered, so that the children would not be able to hear. "Asymptomatic cholera. They're shedding the bacteria."

Anna's professional attitude swung into action. She did not pose him any questions. Whatever had transpired with Kamau had supplied him with an enormous deposit of credibility. "Right. Inside. Now.".

She took them to the clinic's one treatment room. Reuben provided her with ORS packets. "Start them on this. A steady drip. Even if they protest that they're not thirsty. We need to get rid of that pathogen in their systems before it colonizes and before they start to develop symptoms and infect everything.".

He spoke to the mothers who were behind, their faces coated with fear. "You must go back home and boil all the water you drink. Wash your hands with soap and boiled water, particularly after latrine use and before food preparation. Tell your neighbors. Central well water is unsafe. It must be boiled."

He was repeating the System's protocol but using his own words, which had been crafted in twenty years of programming. The women complied, their fear translated into immediate action. They scattered, becoming his runners.

In the clinic, Anna worked systematically, mixing medicine, encouraging the children to swallow. They did so, bewildered but obedient.

Reuben took a step back and watched. The clinical segment was completed. The public health segment—the actual prevention—had only just begun. He had identified the human vectors. Now he had to identify the environmental one.

He walked to the primary well, the primary source where the System had marked. There were a couple of women there, drawing water. He told them, his voice allowing no dissent, that the well was contaminated. That it had to be sterilized. He could see the doubt in their eyes, the inconvenience of it fighting the recollection of Kamau's illness.

He needed to do more. He needed to shock them into compliance.

He was looking at the System interface. EMERGENCY PROVISIONS. His eyes fell on something that he had not seen at first.

- WATER CONTAMINATION TEST KIT (ONE TIME USE): 10 DP

Perfect. Not a trick, but a tool. A way of making the intangible tangible.

He purchased it. -10 DP. REMAINING: 35.

A small plastic container appeared in the side pocket of his satchel. He hadn't even seen it arrive. He opened it. It looked like a school science class bargain pH test kit.

He walked over to the well. The women watched him, curious. He poured a vial of contents into the bucket of newly pumped water, broke apart a capsule of powder into it, and stirred. The water was transformed to a murkey, ominous brownish-red.

A simultaneous gasp came from the small group which had gathered.

"Look?" Reuben proclaimed, his voice clear and loud. "The color means the level of pollution. It is not safe. Boil it."

The tangible proof was a thousand times more potent than his words. The doubt vanished from their faces and gave way to alarm. The message would now be conveyed. It would be bearing the flag of truth.

As he made his way back to the clinic, a double chime rang in his mind, soft and melodious.

OBJECTIVE MET: SECONDARY CHOLERA EPIDEMIC AVERTED. ASYMPTOMATIC CARRIERS SEPARATED AND TREATED. SOURCE UNCOVERED AND PUBLIC SENSITIZATION ENFORCED. RESPONSE EFFECTIVENESS: 98% REWARD: 75 DEVELOPMENT POINTS SCORED.

A wave of relief so powerful it made his legs weak washed over him. He leaned against the sun-warmed wall of the clinic, eyes closed.

He had done it. He had actually invested in the System, spent points on it, trusted what it told him, and it had paid dividends. He had averted a disaster that no one else had a clue was going to occur.

The interface reloaded.

OUTBREAK SYSTEM v.1.0 HOST: Reuben Stone CURRENT OBJECTIVE: PREVENT MALARIA OUTBREAK (TIER 1) - 36:14:08 AVAILABLE DP: 110. DEVELOPMENT CATALOG: [UNLOCKED - 100 DP TO ACCESS TIER 1]

He had passed 100 points. The catalog was open.

He was no longer a forgotten scholar doubting his own mind. He was a man with an instrument, with a purpose, with a countdown. He had been cautioned once before, and he had obeyed. And now he possesses the ability to do more.

He looked towards the clinic door, where Anna was treating the children. He looked at the new face gleaming in his mind's eye: 110 DP.

He could buy the nets.

The real work would now begin.

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