When Min-joon opened his eyes, he was standing in the middle of a street.
But it was not the street outside the convenience store. It was not any street he recognized.
Everything looked wrong. The buildings were the same shape as the ones in his neighborhood, but they were crumbling and covered in strange black vines. The sky was dark red, like the color of dried blood. There were no cars, no people, no sounds except for a low humming noise that seemed to come from everywhere at once.
Min-joon turned in a slow circle, trying to understand what was happening.
"Hello?" he called out. His voice echoed strangely.
No answer.
He looked down at his phone. The screen was still glowing red.
TASK: SURVIVE FOR 30 MINUTES.
REWARD: 5,000,000 WON WILL BE REMOVED FROM YOUR DEBT.
PENALTY FOR FAILURE: DEATH.
TIME REMAINING: 29:54.
"Death?" Min-joon said out loud. "This is insane."
He started walking. His legs felt heavy, like he was moving through water. The street was covered in a thin layer of black dust that rose up with each step.
A sound made him freeze.
It was a clicking noise. Like claws on pavement.
Min-joon turned around slowly.
Something was moving in the shadows between two buildings. It was too dark to see clearly, but he could make out a shape. It was big. Much bigger than a person. And it was getting closer.
Min-joon ran.
He did not think about where he was going. He just ran as fast as he could, his shoes pounding against the dusty ground. The clicking sound followed him, getting louder and faster.
He turned a corner and saw a building with an open door. Without hesitating, he dove inside and slammed the door shut behind him. His hands fumbled for a lock, but there was not one. He pressed his back against the door and held it closed with all his weight.
The clicking stopped.
Min-joon held his breath and listened.
Nothing.
Slowly, carefully, he turned around to look at the room he had trapped himself in.
It was a small office. There was a desk, a chair, and a filing cabinet. Everything was covered in the same black dust as outside. On the wall, there was a calendar. Min-joon walked closer to read it.
The date said June 15th, 2024. That was today's date. But the year was wrong. The calendar said 2024, but it was actually 2024 in the real world too.
Min-joon shook his head. Nothing was making sense.
He checked his phone again.
TIME REMAINING: 27:31.
Still twenty-seven minutes left. He had to survive for twenty-seven more minutes in this nightmare place.
A loud crash made him jump.
The window on the other side of the room exploded inward. Glass flew everywhere. Min-joon threw his arms up to protect his face.
When he lowered them, he saw what had broken through.
It was a creature that looked like a dog, but wrong. Its body was too long, its legs bent at angles that should not be possible, and its head had too many eyes. All of them were looking at Min-joon.
The creature opened its mouth. There were no teeth, just a black void that seemed to pull at the light around it.
"No, no, no," Min-joon whispered, backing away.
The creature jumped through the window and landed in the middle of the room. It moved in a strange, jerky way, like a puppet with tangled strings.
Min-joon grabbed the chair and threw it at the creature. The chair hit it in the side and bounced off, doing no damage. The creature did not even seem to notice.
There was nowhere to run. The creature was between Min-joon and the door. The broken window was too high to reach.
The creature started moving toward him.
Min-joon's hand closed around something on the desk. He looked down and saw it was a letter opener. A small, dull blade. Not much of a weapon, but it was all he had.
The creature lunged.
Min-joon swung the letter opener with all his strength. The blade connected with one of the creature's many eyes. Black liquid sprayed out. The creature made a horrible sound, like metal scraping on metal, and jerked backward.
Min-joon did not wait. He ran past the creature, yanked open the door, and sprinted back out into the red-lit street.
Behind him, he heard the creature crash through the doorway, chasing him again.
His lungs burned. His legs ached. But he kept running.
Ahead, he saw something that made him almost cry with relief. There was a ladder attached to the side of a building, leading up to the roof.
Min-joon jumped and caught the lowest rung. He pulled himself up and started climbing as fast as he could. His arms screamed in protest. He did not look down.
The creature reached the bottom of the ladder and started climbing after him.
Min-joon climbed faster. His hands were slipping on the rusty metal. Just a few more rungs. Just a few more.
He reached the top and hauled himself onto the roof. Then he turned and looked down.
The creature was halfway up the ladder, moving impossibly fast.
Min-joon looked around desperately. There was nothing on the roof except an old water tank and some broken pipes.
He grabbed one of the pipes and yanked it free. It was heavy and solid. He stood at the edge of the roof and waited.
The creature's head appeared over the edge.
Min-joon swung the pipe as hard as he could.
It connected with a wet crunch. The creature lost its grip and fell backward off the ladder. Min-joon heard it hit the ground below with a sickening thud.
He collapsed onto his knees, gasping for air. His whole body was shaking.
His phone buzzed.
TIME REMAINING: 00:47.
Less than a minute left. He had made it.
Min-joon laughed. It was a half-crazed sound, but he could not help it. He was going to survive.
Then he heard the clicking again.
He looked over the edge of the roof.
The creature was standing up. And it was not alone anymore. Three more just like it were emerging from the shadows.
"You have got to be kidding me," Min-joon said.
TIME REMAINING: 00:33.
The creatures started climbing the building. Not using the ladder this time. They were climbing straight up the wall, their too-long legs finding holds in the crumbling brick.
Min-joon backed away from the edge. There was nowhere left to run. He was trapped on the roof.
TIME REMAINING: 00:18.
The first creature appeared over the edge. Then the second. Then the third. The fourth.
They spread out, surrounding him.
Min-joon held up the pipe, even though he knew it was useless. Four against one. He could not win.
TIME REMAINING: 00:09.
The creatures moved closer.
TIME REMAINING: 00:05.
Min-joon closed his eyes and thought of Tae-hyun. He had failed. His brother would be alone now.
TIME REMAINING: 00:01.
White light exploded around him.
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Chapter 13
Min-joon returned to find Tae-hyun waiting anxiously in the hospital room with food containers spread across the small table."Where did you go?" Tae-hyun asked. "I was worried.""Just needed some air," Min-joon lied. The drain was minimal. He was getting better at small lies.They ate dinner together. Tae-hyun talked about his scholarship essay, about his dreams of becoming a doctor, about the future he wanted to build. Min-joon listened and smiled, but his mind was elsewhere.The notebook in his pocket felt heavy. Like it was pulling him toward a decision he was not ready to make.After Tae-hyun left for the night, promising to return in the morning, Min-joon pulled out the notebook and opened it.The first page had a title written in bold letters: THE DEBT SYSTEM - A STUDY IN CONTROL.Below that, Lee Joon-seok had written: "Everything the System tells you is designed to make you compliant. Question everything."Min-joon turned the page and started reading.Lee Joon-seok's notes wer
Chapter 12
Han Woo-jin sat in the chair Tae-hyun had vacated. "Task three was psychological, was it not? Questions about your deepest feelings and fears.""How did you know?""Because task three is always psychological. The System follows a pattern. Physical challenge, navigation and rules, psychological torture, then it gets creative.""Creative how?""You will see," Han Woo-jin said cryptically. "But you have three days to prepare. Use them. Train your body and mind. The next task will require both.""Someone named Lee Joon-seok texted me," Min-joon said. "He said he wants to help me. Do you know who that is?"Han Woo-jin's expression darkened. "Lee Joon-seok. Yes, I know him. He is trouble.""Trouble how?""He is also a former player who completed the System. But unlike me, he is obsessed with destroying it. He thinks he has found a way to break free completely, to escape the System's influence even after completion.""Is that possible?""I do not know," Han Woo-jin admitted. "But Lee Joon-se
Chapter 11
Min-joon woke up in a hospital bed.The ceiling was white and clean. Fluorescent lights hummed above him. For a terrifying moment, he thought he was still in the mirror world. But then he heard familiar sounds. Machines beeping. People talking in the hallway. The smell of disinfectant.A real hospital."Hyung! You are awake!"Tae-hyun was sitting in a chair next to the bed. His eyes were red from crying."What happened?" Min-joon asked. His voice was rough."I found you in the parking lot," Tae-hyun said. "You were unconscious and barely breathing. I called an ambulance. The doctors said you collapsed from exhaustion and malnutrition. They want to keep you here for observation."Min-joon tried to sit up, but his body would not cooperate. Every muscle ached."How long have I been here?""Eight hours," Tae-hyun said. "It is morning now."Min-joon reached for his phone on the bedside table. Tae-hyun had plugged it in to charge. The screen showed several notifications.One was from the ba
Chapter 10
Min-joon opened his eyes in a classroom.He was sitting at a desk in the middle of a large room. Other desks surrounded him, all empty. A chalkboard covered the front wall. The windows showed darkness outside.His phone buzzed.TASK: PASS THE TEST.TIME LIMIT: 3 HOURS.REWARD: 8,000,000 WON REMOVED FROM YOUR DEBT.PENALTY FOR FAILURE: DEATH.SPECIAL CONDITION: YOU MUST ANSWER EVERY QUESTION TRUTHFULLY.TIME REMAINING: 2:59:58.Min-joon read the special condition three times, his heart sinking.Answer every question truthfully.That meant speaking truths. Lots of them. And he was already drained from the collector encounter. Speaking truths in his weakened state would destroy him.The System had set him up to fail.A piece of paper appeared on his desk. A test. Min-joon picked it up and read the first question.Question 1: What is your greatest fear?Min-joon stared at the question. This was not a normal test. These were questions designed to hurt him.He picked up the pencil on his de
Chapter 9
Min-joon spent the next day practicing. He woke up early, left the apartment before Tae-hyun was awake, and went to the abandoned parking lot.He practiced lying and speaking truths, over and over. Building his confidence, learning to feel the flow of power. It was like exercising a muscle he never knew he had.By noon, he could make small objects disappear with barely any effort. By evening, he could change the properties of materials without draining himself completely.He was getting stronger.NEXT TASK IN 6 HOURS.Min-joon checked the notification and took a deep breath. Time to prepare.He went home and found Tae-hyun cooking dinner. The apartment smelled like soy sauce and garlic."Perfect timing," Tae-hyun said cheerfully. "I made japchae. Your favorite."They ate together, talking about Tae-hyun's day at school. He had aced another test. The scholarship essay was going well. Everything seemed normal and peaceful.Min-joon wished he could freeze this moment forever.After dinne
Chapter 8
"Why would you help me?" Min-joon asked suspiciously. "What do you get out of it?""Nothing," Han Woo-jin said. "The System requires it. If I refuse to help you, my debt will be reinstated. I worked too hard to let that happen."Min-joon studied the man carefully. Han Woo-jin looked healthy, successful, nothing like someone who had been through the nightmare Min-joon was experiencing. But his eyes told a different story. They were hard. Cold. The eyes of someone who had seen terrible things."What do you want to teach me?" Min-joon asked carefully."How to use your curse properly," Han Woo-jin said. "You are wasting its potential. I can show you techniques that will increase your chances of survival significantly.""How do you know about my curse? Each person gets a different one, right?""Correct. Mine was different from yours. But I have helped three other players since completing my tasks. I have seen various curses. Yours is rare, but not unique. I know how it works."Min-joon wan
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