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Chapter 24: Who Is the Winner?
Author: Emmy write
last update2025-08-04 00:39:19

The energy in the auditorium was electric. Neon lights flashed across the stage, confetti canons were cocked and ready, and the roar of the crowd was deafening.  Stepper was on stage, delivering a show-stopping performance that felt like a Super Bowl halftime show. Her voice thundered through the hall, her choreography flawless, her presence magnetic. Everyone was on their feet, screaming, singing along, recording every second.

While the audience was caught in the trance of flashing lights and thumping bass, the judges were hard at work. In the background, they moved from one car to the next, clipboards in hand, their eyes squinting and scrutinising every detail—the craftsmanship of the bodywork, the luxury of the interiors, the innovation of the tech, and the durability promised by the engine builds. Each car was more than a vehicle—it was a statement. And the judges had to choose which one spoke loudest.

As  Stepper’s final note rang out and she exited the stage with Lil Press waving to the crowd, the lights dimmed. The compere stepped onto the stage once more, his suit now glittering under the spotlight, holding an envelope that seemed to carry the fate of the night.

“Ladies and gentlemen!” he called out, his voice booming across the speakers. “Let’s make some noise one more time for all our contestants!”

The crowd erupted, a tide of applause and whistles echoing off the walls.

“Now,” the compere continued, “it’s time for what we’ve all been waiting for. Contestants, please take your places beside your vehicles. The judges are ready, and I’ve got the results right here in my hand.”

Tension blanketed the stage. Every contestant stood in silence. You could practically hear their heartbeats.

Anabel wrapped her arm tightly around Daniel, a clear show of support, her chin lifted with poise.

Rita and Jerry interlocked hands, fingers squeezed tight as though their grip could secure the outcome.

Noel adjusted his collar, his eyes fixed on the judges’ panel with unwavering confidence.

Anna exhaled slowly, her boots clicking softly as she moved closer to her car.

Collins, still wearing his boyish grin, casually leaned on his golden yellow Bugatti, trying to mask his nerves with charm.

The compere paused, smiling mischievously.

“I’m going to read the results from bottom to top. Let’s keep the suspense alive, shall we?” he teased, and the crowd answered with a cheer.

A hush fell again.

“Alright! In fifth place, give it up for… Collins!”

Applause rang out. The usherettes in glittery black uniforms surrounded Collins with a small medal and gestured him forward for photos.

Collins gave a slight bow and took it all in good humour, flashing his red-haired smile to the cameras. “Better a medal than none,” he chuckled, stepping onto the fifth place spot on the podium. “I’ll take this win to the bank.”

The compere nodded. “Let’s move on! In fourth place—the bold, the beautiful, the only female contestant in this year’s showcase—Anna!!”

The crowd rose again in ovation, louder this time. Some stood and whistled. Others clapped rhythmically.

Anna beamed. She hadn’t expected first place, but her heart was full. She proudly stepped forward, receiving her silver medal and a special “Trailblazer” sash for being the only woman in a male-dominated contest.

The judges, particularly Mrs. Jones, stood to shake her hand, a look of genuine respect on her face.

Anna turned to the audience, her eyes immediately finding her parents. Her mother was weeping into a handkerchief, and her father stood beside her, applauding proudly.

With her chin held high, Anna moved gracefully to stand beside Collins on the 5-tier winner’s platform, on the fourth step.

Three positions remained.

The tension only thickened.

Jerry felt it creeping into his chest—tight, constricting. He knew the next name would determine everything. If he came first, he’d finally shut everyone up. Finally prove he was the boss of the school.

The compere raised the mic again. “And now, for the third position…”

The crowd leaned in. Silence.

The compere’s lips curled slightly as he read the card.

“Jerry!”

A wave of murmurs and gasps rose before the applause.

Some were shocked—it had seemed like Jerry would at least come second. But many nodded in understanding. Noel's car was undeniably more expensive. Daniel's? A whole different level.

Jerry clenched his jaw briefly, but forced a smile as he and Rita stepped forward. The usher handed him a bronze trophy and an envelope.

“Congratulations, Jerry. You just won an all-expense paid vacation to the Maldives for you and your partner,” the compere said.

Rita clapped with extra enthusiasm, whispering “Maldives, baby,” into Jerry’s ear while kissing him on the cheek.

He laughed, stiffly, and accepted the trophy. His picture was taken, and he stood on the third step, his mind still swirling. Deep down, it was better than losing to John—who had yet to even show up.

Now, all eyes were on Daniel and Noel.

The compere called them to the centre of the stage. They walked with swagger, both confident, both used to attention. The stage lights caught every detail of their designer suits.

“Well, gentlemen,” the compere began, “you’ve both made it to the final two. How are we feeling?”

Daniel spoke first, his voice calm and arrogant. “I feel confident. I know what I brought. I built my car to win.”

Noel, smirking, replied, “Winning is a state of mind. This is fun, but trophy or not, I’m still the best.”

A girl in the front row yelled, “That’s my king!”

The compere chuckled. “Spoken like a true bad boy.”

Then… silence.

A drum roll began.

“Ladies and gentlemen… the moment we’ve waited for… The second place trophy for the 2025 Luxury Car Showcase goes to…”

The crowd began to chant, “N-O-E-L! N-O-E-L!”

The compere opened the envelope.

“NOEL!”

The crowd cheered, some in shock, some vindicated. Noel stepped forward with a smirk, accepted his silver trophy, and opened his envelope.

“You’ve won a fully-funded couples trip and a brand-new beach house in Malibu!” the compere announced.

Whistles exploded through the crowd.

Noel grinned, looked toward Anna, and winked. It was clear who he hoped to share that trip with.

And then it happened.

The music shifted.

Golden confetti rained from the ceiling.

“Ladies and gentlemen, the winner of the 2025 showcase—Daniel!!”

Daniel threw his hands in the air, the crowd bursting with roars of celebration. Anabel clung to him, screaming with joy, and kissed him so intensely that the compere had to yell “Okay, okay! PG-13, people!”

Daniel was handed a gold trophy, a gold medal, and a golden sash. His prize?

A luxury trip to three countries of his choice and a brand-new penthouse in New York City.

Anabel jumped into his arms. “I told you, baby! You’re the best!”

The photographers swarmed, taking pictures of Daniel, then of Noel, and finally capturing the full winner's podium from fifth to first.

But as the cheers carried on, two people weren’t cheering.

Jerry, on the third step, kept scanning the crowd. He felt something. A shadow.

“John is here,” he muttered to himself. “I know it.”

Noel, on the other side of the stage, seemed to echo that same suspicion. His eyes searched the dark corners of the auditorium.

Where was John?

Why hadn’t he participated?

Had he lost his confidence—or was he just waiting for the right time?

As the photographers clicked away and Daniel began delivering his thank-you speech, the crowd listened.

But Daniel didn't thank the judges. Or his company. Or even his girlfriend.

Instead, he turned toward the mic and said, “You know, it’s funny. There’s someone who should be here tonight. Someone who thinks he’s some kind of secret heir. But I guess when the pressure gets real, he runs.”

The audience murmured.

He was talking about John.

“And let this be a reminder,” Daniel said, raising his gold trophy, “real winners show up. Pretenders stay in the shadows.”

Cameras flashed. Whispers swirled.

But from the far back, where the shadows merged with the flashing lights, a quiet figure stood up and adjusted his suit.

He was done waiting.

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