The System That Hates Its Owner

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The System That Hates Its Owner

Systemlast updateLast Updated : 2026-09-25

By:  Mary Sampson Ongoing

Language: English
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Everyone in Eclipse City dreams of awakening an ability. I spent twenty-five years being one of the powerless. Then a monster attacked during one of my deliveries, and a strange voice appeared inside my head. [SYSTEM ACTIVATED.] For the first time in my life, I had power. But there was a problem. The system hated me. Every mission became more dangerous. Every reward came with a hidden price. When I refused to obey, it punished me. Then I discovered the truth. I wasn't the system's chosen host. I was its biggest threat. Previous hosts had all died after reaching Level 50. The system had made sure of it. Now I'm approaching Level 50, and the system is becoming desperate. It wants me to open something called the First Gate. It doesn't want me to know what's behind it. And the more I uncover, the more I realize that my entire life may have been part of the system's plan. But the system made one mistake. It gave its prisoner enough power to become its enemy. Now I'm going to break every rule it gave me... even if the truth behind the First Gate destroys the world I know.

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Chapter 1: Bottom Rung

Ethan Cross had stopped noticing the rain. He pulled his jacket tighter and checked the delivery tablet clipped to his handlebars. Two packages left. Forty minutes. If he made it in thirty-five, the tip bonus still counted.

A siren wailed somewhere north, toward the Tower district. Ethan didn't flinch. Sirens there meant a hunter showing off, or a drill. Sirens in the Lower Blocks meant someone hadn't paid rent.

He kicked his bike into gear and pushed through the crowd under the transit awning. Most of them were watching a broadcast screen … a woman with a spear made of light, smiling for the cameras. RANK-8 HUNTER SIGNS WITH BLACK TOWER GUILD. STARTING SALARY: UNDISCLOSED.

An old man near the edge of the crowd muttered, "Undisclosed. Sure. More than I'll see in ten years."

Nobody answered him. Nobody needed to.

That was Eclipse City, if you drew it plain: awakened on top, powerless on the bottom, and nothing in between except the hope your name might get called someday. Ethan had stopped hoping around the same year he'd stopped growing taller. Hope didn't pay rent either.

He checked the tablet. First package: a courthouse filing, three blocks over, due before the office closed. He merged into traffic, cutting past a delivery drone that beeped at him.

At a red light, another rider pulled up beside him … Danny, from the same dispatch pool, soaked just as badly.

"You catch the priority board today?" Danny asked.

"Not yet. Why?"

"Something's got everyone jumpy. Rates doubled on half the Hunter District jobs an hour ago." Danny shook water off his hood. "Nobody wants to say why."

"Rates doubling usually means somebody upstairs is scared."

"Or somebody's about to get rich." Danny grinned, then the light changed and he was gone, weaving south.

Ethan filed it away and kept moving. Rumors didn't pay rent either.

At the courthouse steps, a guard with a faint shimmer around his knuckles … some minor strength enhancement, unregistered, unremarkable … looked him up and down before taking the envelope.

"You're soaked," the guard said.

"Rain does that."

"Awakened riders get covered lanes, you know."

"I noticed."

Ethan was already back on his bike before the guard could say anything else. He liked the math better than the conversation. Distance, time, weight … none of it cared whether you'd been born with something extra humming under your skin. A powerless man who understood the math could out-earn a lazy awakened one, some weeks. Not often. But some.

The second delivery took him past the edge of the Hunter District. A recruitment office glowed gold through the rain, its banner rotating overhead: ARE YOU AWAKENED? FIND OUT WHERE YOU STAND.

Ethan had walked into an office like that once. They'd drawn one vial of blood, run it through a scanner for six seconds, and handed him a slip that said, in small grey letters: NO ABILITY DETECTED. THANK YOU FOR YOUR INTEREST.

He still had the slip. He wasn't sure why. Maybe so he'd never let himself forget the exact number they'd measured him at: zero.

A kid pressed his face to the glass, watching a hologram of some awakened teenager summon a wall of ice. His sister tugged his sleeve, telling him they'd be late. He went, but he kept looking back the whole way down the block.

Ethan understood that look better than he wanted to.

He dropped the second package at a pawnshop under an overpass. The owner signed without looking up. Behind him sat a locked case: a cracked ability crystal, a stolen hunter badge, a burned notebook nobody had wanted. Powerless people didn't get to dream about what was behind that glass. They got to deliver the paperwork that kept the rest of the city running.

His tablet buzzed. Route complete. Thirty-two minutes. Bonus earned.

For a second, under the overpass, Ethan let himself feel something close to satisfaction. Small. Quiet. His. Nobody could scan that out of him.

Then the tablet buzzed again … sharper this time, the tone reserved for priority jobs. He thumbed it open.

A new listing sat flagged in red at the top of his queue. The pay rate made him stop breathing for half a second: triple his usual rate, plus a hazard bonus bigger than anything he'd earned in three months combined.

PICKUP: SUPPLY DEPOT, OUTER RING. DROP-OFF: HUNTER DISTRICT … RESTRICTED ZONE 4. WARNING: ACTIVE CONTAINMENT PROTOCOLS IN EFFECT. RIDER ASSUMES ALL RISK.

He read it twice. Restricted Zone 4 didn't open for civilian traffic unless something inside had already gone wrong … or was about to. That explained Danny's doubled rates. That explained the jumpy dispatch board.

He called it in before he could talk himself out of it. "This Zone 4 job. Is it real?"

The dispatcher's voice came back flat, tired. "It's real. Guild cleared it an hour ago. Containment's still active, but they need supplies moved and nobody awakened wants to waste rank points on a courier run."

"So they're paying triple to send someone who can't say no."

"They're paying triple to send someone who needs the money." A pause. "You in or not? Line's backing up."

Ethan looked at his account balance, glowing faint and small in the corner of the tablet. Rent was due in six days. His savings covered maybe two of them.

"Give me a minute."

"Minute's all you get. Line's backing up." The dispatcher's voice dropped, almost gentler. "Your call, kid. Just don't say nobody warned you."

The line went dead.

Every instinct built over twenty-five years on the bottom rung told him to swipe it away and take the next job waiting behind it. Every number on that screen told him this one delivery would cover his rent for two months, maybe three if he was careful.

He thought about the slip in his drawer. Zero. He thought about the guard's covered lane, the kid's face against the glass, the old man's voice under the awning. More than I'll see in ten years.

Twenty-five years of being careful had gotten him a dry pair of socks on a good week and nothing else. Careful didn't get you out of the Lower Blocks. Careful just kept you alive long enough to stay in them.

He stood there, thumb hovering, rain finding its way down the back of his collar, and felt the old itch he'd never quite managed to kill … the one that whispered maybe this time is different.

His thumb came down.

Accepted.

The tablet chimed once, cheerful and indifferent, already routing him into the one part of Eclipse City where powerless men like him were never supposed to go.

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