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CHAPTER 5: PROMISES OF DEATH
Author: Steph Avery
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Marcus stood on the sidewalk watching Elena and Leo disappear around the corner of the busy street until they were completely out of his sight. His chest felt unbearably tight with an emotion he had not experienced in many long years and could not quite name even now.

The afternoon sun cast long shadows across the pavement and the sounds of the city continued around him as if nothing important had just happened. Cars honked in traffic. People walked past talking on phones. Street vendors called out their wares. Life went on completely normal for everyone except Marcus who felt like his entire world had just shifted on its axis.

David approached carefully from behind. "Sir, that was difficult to watch. The woman clearly hates you with everything she has."

"She has every right to hate me," Marcus replied quietly, still staring at the empty corner. "I destroyed her life even if I did not intend to. The result is the same."

"What do you want to do now?"

Marcus finally turned to face his aide. "We protect them. Both of them. Elena can hate me all she wants but I will not let anyone hurt her or Leo."

"Even if she never knows you are helping?"

"Especially if she never knows," Marcus said firmly. "Her pride is all she has left. If she knew I was paying her debts or fixing her problems she would feel like charity. She would feel weak. I cannot do that to her."

David nodded slowly. "So we work from the shadows."

"Exactly. Now take me back to the hotel. We have much to plan."

They walked toward the black Bentley waiting at the curb. As Marcus settled into the back seat his mind was already working through multiple scenarios and strategies simultaneously the way it always did before major operations.

"Sir there is something else you should know," David said as he started driving. "While you were dealing with Felix Grant earlier today, I received reports about the Hayes and Sterling families. They are both in crisis mode after what you did at the wedding."

"Good. That was the intention."

"But they are not just angry sir. They are terrified. You humiliated them in front of five hundred witnesses. You crippled the Sterling heir on his wedding day. That kind of public disgrace cannot go unanswered in their world."

Marcus watched the city pass by outside his window. "What are they doing?"

"Emergency meetings at both family compounds. Our sources say they are pooling resources to deal with you. This is no longer just the Hayes family or just the Sterling family. They are combining forces."

"Let them combine. It will make destroying them more efficient when they are all together."

David glanced in the rearview mirror. "Sir they have significant power in this city. Politicians, judges, police chiefs. They own half the government."

"They owned half the government," Marcus corrected. "Past tense. By the time I am finished with them, they will own nothing but regrets."

They drove in silence for a few minutes before David spoke again. "What about Elena's situation? You said you want to help her secretly. Where should I start?"

"Start with her debts. How much does she owe in total?"

David pulled up information on his tablet while keeping one hand on the wheel. "Medical debt from when Leo was hospitalized last year comes to about fifty thousand dollars. She has been making minimum payments but the interest keeps growing. At her current rate, she will never pay it off."

Marcus felt anger rising in his chest. His son had been sick enough to be hospitalized and he knew nothing about it. Elena had faced that terror alone with no money and no support.

"Pay it off immediately," he ordered. "But make it look like she qualified for some kind of debt relief program. She cannot know it came from me."

"Understood. What else?"

"Her living situation. That apartment building in the Riverside district is not safe. The neighborhood has too much crime and the building security is terrible."

"Do you want me to arrange better housing for her?"

"No she would refuse if it seemed too convenient. But I want that building bought through a shell company. Then I want proper security installed, the rent lowered for all tenants, and everything fixed that needs fixing. Make it look like new ownership is just improving their investment."

"That will take a few days to arrange properly sir."

"Then start immediately. What about her father's case?"

David scrolled through more information. "Richard Rodriguez is serving a ten-year sentence for manslaughter related to the warehouse accident. But our initial investigation shows the evidence against him was weak. Looks like someone paid to make sure he was convicted."

"The Rodriguez main family sold him out to protect themselves," Marcus said with disgust. "Find out who the prosecutor was. Find out who paid him. Get me proof."

"And then?"

"Then we get her father released and make sure everyone who framed him faces consequences."

David made notes on his tablet. "This is going to cost significant resources sir. Are you sure you want to invest this much in someone who wants nothing to do with you?"

Marcus looked at his aide steadily. "Leo is my son. That makes Elena the mother of my child. I failed to protect her five years ago even though I did not know she existed. I will not fail again."

"Even if she never forgives you?"

"Even then. My responsibility does not depend on her forgiveness."

They arrived at the Grand Harbor Hotel and took the private elevator up to the Presidential Suite. As soon as they entered Marcus went to his secure laptop and began pulling up files.

"Sir you should rest," David suggested. "You have been going nonstop since you arrived in Grandview."

"I will rest when the Hayes and Sterling families are destroyed. Right now I need to understand their operations completely."

For the next several hours Marcus studied detailed reports on both families. Their business holdings, their illegal activities, their connections, their weaknesses. He approached it like a military campaign because that was what it was. War by another name.

David worked at another computer handling the arrangements for Elena's debt relief and her father's case. Occasionally he would update Marcus on progress.

"Sir I have located the prosecutor who handled Richard Rodriguez's case. His name is Gerald Mitchell. He has a history of questionable convictions."

"Can you prove he was paid off?"

"Working on it. We will need to access his financial records which will take time."

"You have forty-eight hours. I want Elena's father out of prison as soon as possible."

Marcus continued studying until his phone rang with an unknown number. He answered cautiously.

"Mr Chen, my name is Victor Montgomery. I believe we have not been formally introduced but you recently had an encounter with someone under my protection."

Marcus leaned back in his chair. "Felix Grant. Your godson."

"Yes. I want you to know that Felix acted without my knowledge or approval. What he did was unacceptable."

"He kidnapped my son and threatened the mother. He is lucky to still be breathing."

"I agree completely," Montgomery said smoothly. "In fact, I am calling to discuss a matter of mutual interest. The Hayes and Sterling families."

"What about them?"

"They are enemies of mine as well as yours Mr Chen. I think we should meet and discuss how we might help each other."

Marcus considered this carefully. Victor Montgomery was the most powerful crime lord in Grandview. He controlled the underground economy and had connections everywhere. An alliance with him could be useful but also dangerous.

"Why would you want to help me?"

"Because you are going to war with the Hayes and Sterling families whether I help you or not. And when powerful families go to war, opportunities arise for those wise enough to see them. I would rather be your ally than compete for the spoils."

"You mean you want to profit from their downfall."

Montgomery laughed. "I am a businessman Mr Chen. Of course, I want to profit. But I can also provide you with information and resources you cannot get elsewhere. I know things about the Hayes family that would be very valuable to you."

"What kind of things?"

"The kind we should discuss in person. Are you interested in meeting?"

Marcus thought about it. Montgomery was right that he would be useful. And keeping him as an ally was better than having him as an enemy or competitor.

"I will meet with you. But I choose the location and time."

"Of course. Send me the details. I look forward to our conversation Mr Chen."

After the call ended David looked concerned. "Are you sure about this sir? Montgomery is dangerous."

"Everyone in this city is dangerous. That is why I need to control who is dangerous against me versus dangerous for me. Montgomery can be useful."

"Or he could betray you to the Hayes family."

"Then I will deal with him too. But I do not think he will. He is a businessman first. He sees profit in helping me destroy the Hayes and Sterling families. That motivation I can trust more than loyalty."

David nodded reluctantly. "When should I schedule the meeting?"

"Tomorrow night. Choose a neutral restaurant. Private room. Make sure our people scout it thoroughly first."

"Understood sir."

Marcus returned to his files but found his concentration slipping. His thoughts kept returning to Elena's face when she told him to stay away. The pain in her eyes. The hatred in her voice.

He pulled out his phone and looked at the photos David had compiled. Pictures of Elena and Leo from their daily life. Going to school. Buying groceries. Walking in the park.

In every photo, Elena looked exhausted but she smiled for her son. And Leo despite having so little looked happy. She had given him a good life with nothing.

Marcus zoomed in on one photo of Leo laughing at something. The boy had his eyes. His smile. There was no denying he was Marcus's son.

A son who had grown up without a father because Marcus had been rotting in prison for a crime he did not commit. A son who had a mother who sacrificed everything to raise him alone.

"Sir," David said quietly. "You should see this."

Marcus looked up. "What is it?"

"I just received a message from one of our surveillance teams. The Rodriguez family is having an emergency meeting right now. Our source inside says they are discussing what to do about Elena."

Marcus felt cold settle over him. "What do they want with her?"

"They are worried about your involvement with her. Some are suggesting they should try to reconcile with Elena to control the situation. Others are suggesting something worse."

"What?"

"They are considering contacting the Hayes family. Offering Elena to them in exchange for protection from your revenge."

Marcus stood up so fast his chair fell backward. "They would sell her to my enemies?"

"It is just a suggestion right now. No decision has been made."

"There will be no decision to make," Marcus said and his voice was deadly quiet. "Send a message to the Rodriguez family head immediately. Tell him Elena and her son are under my personal protection. Anyone who touches them answers to me directly."

"Sir that will make the Rodriguez family your enemy too."

"They made themselves my enemy the moment they considered betraying her. Send the message now."

David quickly typed out the message and sent it. "Done. But sir this complicates things significantly. You will now be fighting multiple families simultaneously."

"Good. Let them all come at once. It will be faster."

Marcus walked to the window and looked out at the city lights. Somewhere out there Elena was probably putting Leo to bed. Somewhere the Hayes and Sterling families were plotting revenge. Somewhere the Rodriguez family was deciding whether to betray their own blood.

And tomorrow he would sit down with Victor Montgomery to form an alliance built on mutual greed and shared enemies.

His phone buzzed with a text message from an unknown number. When he opened it his blood went cold.

The message showed a photo of Leo playing in the schoolyard. The caption read: "Cute kid. Would be a shame if something happened to him."

Marcus immediately showed it to David. "Trace this now."

David's fingers flew across his tablet. "The message came from a burner phone. Location shows it was sent from the Rodriguez family compound."

"So they are already making threats," Marcus said quietly. "They think they can use my son to control me."

"What do you want me to do sir?"

"Double security on Leo starting immediately. And David, anyone who gets within fifty feet of that boy without authorization does not leave alive. Understood?"

"Perfectly sir."

Marcus looked back at the threatening photo. They had made a terrible mistake sending this. They thought they were warning him. Instead, they had just signed their own death warrants.

He typed a response and sent it to the same number: "Touch him and your entire family disappears."

Then he turned to David. "Get me everything on the Rodriguez family. Every business, every account, every secret. I want them destroyed even more thoroughly than the Hayes family."

"Yes sir. Should I also arrange additional protection for Elena herself?"

"Yes, but she cannot know about it. Invisible coverage twenty-four hours a day. If anyone approaches her who is not a known friendly they get intercepted before making contact."

David made notes. "This is getting very complicated very quickly sir."

"War always is. But I have fought in worse situations and won. This is just another battlefield."

Marcus returned to his computer but now he was looking at files on the Rodriguez family instead. Another enemy to destroy. Another family that had hurt someone under his protection.

By dawn, he would have a complete battle plan. Within a week the Rodriguez family would regret ever hearing the name Marcus Chen.

And Elena would never know he was the one protecting her from the shadows.

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