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Neo MoroengChapter 63 is a quiet, heavy counterpoint to the explosive action of the last chapter. We step away from the council and the Rake to sit with our narrator in the devastating aftermath. The cost of that "victory" is finally tallied in the most personal way possible. This was an emotionally challenging chapter to write, delving into the raw, private grief and guilt that has been driving the protagonist all this time. We finally hear Nancy's voice, and it shatters everything. It’s a moment of horrific violation, but also one of terrible, shameful hope—the confirmation that a part of her is still fighting in the dark. It’s a shared burden now, with Ka!ri as his silent witness. Thank you for being on this intense emotional journey. Your support and engagement mean the world. Let me know your thoughts in the comments. -N.M
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Chapter 87: The Tether Pulls Tight
The proximity alarm was still blaring, a sound I hadn’t heard in twenty years, clawing at the quiet I’d spent decades building. My heart was a frantic drum against my ribs, a wild, painful rhythm that synced with the burning twist deep beneath my shoulder blade. The phantom was no longer a ghost. It was a live wire. I stared at the viewscreen, my breath caught in my throat. The image resolved, sharp and impossible. There she was. Ka!ri. Time had not touched her. It was as if I’d blinked on that observation deck and opened my eyes thirty-five years later to find her still waiting. Her skin was still that polished obsidian, her frame the same perfect, lean geometry of a warrior. Her eyes, that molten gold, burned with the same fierce, unyielding resolve. And her jawline—that strong, defiant line—was exactly as it had been seared into my memory. A beautiful, cruel constant in a universe that had aged without her. “General,” her voice came through the comm, smooth and familiar, the cl
Chapter 86: The General’s Logs
ENTRY 001 - The Phantom Pain The ache started two days after we landed. A sharp, burning twist beneath my right shoulder blade. The med-techs ran every diagnostic. They checked my spine, my muscles, my organs. They found nothing. No strain. No fracture. No inflammation. The pain, they told me, was a phantom. They were wrong. It wasn't phantom. It was real. It was a referred pain, a signal from a wound so deep it had to manifest physically. The wound wasn't in my shoulder. It was in my heart. The ache was a permanent, grinding reminder of the moment I walked away from her on that observation deck. It was the memory of the goodbye I never got to say. I keep trying to burn her face into my mind, to hold it so tight that the pain will fade. But the memory is too sharp, too detailed. Her beauty is a kind of cruelty, a constant reminder of what I had and what I let go. I see her standing there, the harsh fluorescent light of the med-bay doing nothing to diminish the deep, resonant darknes
Chapter 85: The Harvest of Peace
The docking bay of the Ares Spire was a cathedral of noise and light, but to me, it felt like a tomb. The cheers that greeted the Vigilant’s scarred hull were a distant roar, a sound meant for other men. I walked down the ramp, the weight of command replaced by a heavier, colder weight—the memory of what we’d left behind in the dark. We were heroes. The crowd saw conquerors returned from the abyss. I felt like a gravedigger who’d barely clawed his way out of the earth.The celebration died in the council chamber. I stood in the same spot where I’d once argued for a desperate gamble, and where Da’kar had later woven his beautiful, poisonous lies. This time, I didn’t need to argue. I let the Vigilant’s logs do the talking. I let them hear Da’kar’s voice, cool and calculating, betraying us. I made them watch the nightmare footage of the hive, the psychic scream that had torn through our ship. And I saved the final image for last: the Acquisitor, half-dissolved into that pulsating, organic
Chapter 84: The Scattered Crown
The Vigilant limped from the corpse of the hive, its hull scarred, its crew silent. The victory felt hollow, a deflated thing. We had not slain a monster; we had kicked a hornet's nest and now the sky was full of queens. The decision was unanimous. We had to fall back. We had to warn them. The Council, Mars, the entire damned fragile peace—they needed to know the war they thought was over had just mutated. We set a course for the nearest comms buoy at the edge of the dead sector, our systems too battered for a long-range burst. The silence on the bridge was a physical weight. Then, an alarm blared. “Unidentified vessel! Bearing 2-1-0!” Spinner yelled, his voice raw. “It’s just… sitting there.” On the screen, hanging in the void like a specter, was the NCV Oracle. Da’kar’s ship. It was pristine, untouched. And it was blocking our path. A comm request flashed. I accepted. Da’kar’s face filled the viewer. He looked… different. His eyes held a feverish light, a religious fervor.
Chapter 83: The Parasite
The Vigilant groaned around us, a dying animal caught in the jaws of something infinitely older and hungrier. The pressure in my skull was no longer a sound; it was a physical weight, a vise of pure alien will trying to crack my mind open. I’d led armies, made decisions that cost lives, but I had never felt a fear this absolute. This was the end we’d been racing toward, the monster we’d foolishly believed we could hunt. Then the hull screamed. “Breach! Port side! They’re inside!” Spinner’s voice was a ragged thing, torn by static and panic. The world narrowed to the corridor ahead. A conduit burst open, and the nightmare poured through. Not one, but a flood of them. Rakes. They moved in a terrifying, skittering unison, all jerking limbs and needle teeth, their silence more deafening than any war cry. This was the swarm. The meat grinder. They weren’t here to fight; they were here to disassemble us. Gareseb met the tide with a roar that was pure defiance, his pulse rifle carving
Chapter 82: The Oracle's Gambit
Silence. It was the only fitting successor to the cacophony of his triumph. Da’kar stood alone in the vast, empty council chamber. The obsidian floor felt like a sheet of ice over an abyss. He had won. The crown was his, forged from cold, dead metal. His hand rose, fingers brushing against the heavy weight on his chest. A necklace. A thick chain from which hung a single, palm-sized, uncut shard of Red Rock. Its internal fire was dormant, a deep, bloody crimson. It was a rosary. A totem. A reminder of the specific, resonant dread that had unmade the Rakes. By wearing it, he felt he was pinning his prayers for survival to the very thing that the Rake sought to master.. He descended to the primary hangar. The ship waiting for him was a statement. The NCV Oracle was a blade of polished darkness, its lines sleek and predatory. Its main weapon, a grotesque spinal mount, hummed with a low, hungry frequency—a psionic disruptor designed to annihilate consciousness itself. He dismissed the o
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