6.
A bunch of black Range Rovers screeched to a halt outside the Galton lounge, and heads swung their way. People waiting to meet Mr. Galton inside the hotel couldn't believe their eyes. The cars were shiny and black, and the low rumble of the engines seemed to shout, Power! Finn got out of the first car, a band on his wrist glinting. He walked coolly, like he owned the place.
The waiting crowd was itching with curiosity. Whispers flew fast. Who's that? someone asked. Is he Valia royalty? another wondered. Everyone stared, unsure what to make of the guy swaggering in with such confidence.
Inside, Elara spotted him first. Her eyes popped, then her brother-in-law and brother saw him too. Adrian, who was crushing on her, just froze. They hurried over, looking ticked off. What are you doing here? Elara snapped, blocking his path. Who said you could come here and mess with us?
Her brother-in-law and brother jumped in, raising their voices. You don't belong here. Get lost before you embarrass yourself, they yelled, piling on the insults, calling him a nobody with no money or reason to be there. They warned him he'd be tossed out and beaten before Mr. Galton even showed up, so he should leave with some shred of dignity.
The crowd buzzed, shocked by the scene. Some sneered, others gawked, but Finn ignored them, his eyes glued to the hotel entrance. The charity thing inside was supposed to be exclusive, but he wasn't backing down.
Darius stepped up, fuming. You can't go in there. No way. Mr. Galton won't even look at you, he sneered, trying to block Finn, raising a hand like he'd hit him.
Finn's voice was calm but firm. Give me ten seconds, he said. Ten seconds to show you what's what.
The crowd snickered, thinking it was impossible. Who does he think he is? someone whispered. Darius's face darkened as he moved closer, trying to scare Finn even more.
Quick as lightning, Finn grabbed Darius mid-lunge and tossed him back a few feet. That's the last time you raise a hand to me, Finn warned, his voice steady. The crowd went silent, stunned.
Ignoring the insults from Elara and her family, Finn went to the door where the bouncers stood. They were about to stop him, but he showed them the band on his wrist. They froze, then bowed deeply. One spoke quickly into his radio, calling Mr. Galton.
Everyone watching couldn't believe it. The guy they were just mocking was now bossing the guards around. The crowd whispered, Who *is* he? How's he ordering the guards?
Elara stormed closer, her voice shaking with anger. This isn't happening. Why is he here? Who does he think he is?
Her brother-in-law and brother shouted, He can't go in! He's nothing! Mr. Galton won't even spit on him!
Adrian was just speechless, trying to wrap his head around how Finn, the guy they all looked down on, was suddenly in charge.
Finn's eyes scanned the room. He locked eyes with the doorman showed what he was wearing on his wrist. He checked every weakness, hesitation, and hidden motive. He could feel the tension in the crowd. He didn't need to say anything. Just being there demanded respect.
The insults kept coming, but they didn't faze him. You're nothing! You have no money! You can't come in here! someone shouted. Finn just waited.
A moment later, the doors to the lobby swung open, and everyone looked over. Mr. Galton walked in, his eyes locked on Finn. He walked right up to him, nodding with a calm smile.
The crowd gasped. Elara, her family, and Adrian were stunned. This can't be real, Elara whispered. Who is he?
Darius's jaw dropped. He couldn't understand how Mr. Galton, someone so important, had come to greet Finn. Every insult he'd thrown seemed pointless now.
Mr. Galton held out his hand to Finn. I've been expecting you, he said, his voice steady but friendly. Welcome, Lord Finn. It's an honor to have you here.
The crowd mumbled, trying to figure this out. Finn, the nobody they dismissed, was now getting the same respect as the most important person in the room.
Elara's face went from angry to confused, her mouth opening and closing silently. Her brother-in-law and brother were just as shocked. Adrian stepped back, looking frustrated and confused. None of them understood how Finn, the guy they had insulted and underestimated, had earned Mr. Galton's respect.
Finn looked Mr. Galton in the eye, feeling confident. He could feel the change, giving him an edge. He was starting to see the power he was about to have.
The bouncers and hotel staff stepped aside, making way for him. People stared in amazement as he walked through the crowd. The air around him seemed to crackle with and excitement.
Darius stepped up one last time, his eyes full of fury. This is impossible! No one bosses Mr. Galton around like that!
Finn didn't even flinch. He just lifted his chin and said calmly, I'm Lord Finn. And you'll learn some respect before this day is over.
Mr. Galton smiled slightly. Don't worry about them. Your path is clear. They'll find out who you are soon enough.
Finn looked around at the crowd, at Elara, her family, and Adrian. He wasn't scared, or unsure, just determined. The journey ahead was tough, but he was starting to grasp the power he now had.
This was just the beginning. And Finn Rowe knew nothing could stop him from getting to the top.
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CHAPTER ELEVEN.
And Finally ...His eyes had this faint, auburn glow, and a see-through screen popped up in front of him. It was full of numbers, icons, and alerts blinking in a language only he understood.[System Activated]Welcome, Finn Rowe.[Status: You passed the auction trial!][Reward: You have more pull and clout now!][Reward: Mrs. Ashburn noticed you!][Virtual Assistant: Venus, online]A calm, clear voice echoed in his head. “Hi Finn, I’m Venus, your virtual assistant. You aced trial one. Your pull and rep are up. Time for new tasks.”[Current Level: Possible Successor][Stats: Money – 70/100, Pull – 50/100, Awareness – 45/100][Special Skill: Auburn Eyes – Ready to go]Venus went on, “Your Auburn Eyes are live. This means you can see more, spot hidden clues, and quickly figure out the pros and cons of any situation. Use them smart to get through these trials.”[Next Up: Find and shut down four family drug money operations][Goal: Find families secretly dealing drugs and take over their g
CHAPTER TEN.
10.Mrs. China stepped up, her voice loud enough for everyone to hear. Alright, folks, let's get this auction going! We've got a special item today, straight from Mrs. Ella Ashburn herself. Whoever wins this doesn't just get the item; they get Mrs. Ashburn's attention and respect too.The crowd got all excited. As soon as they understood what she said, people started trying to get in good with Mrs. Ashburn. They crowded around the auction area, whispering compliments, and basically trying to flatter her, hoping she'd notice them. Everyone was watching Finn Rowe in the VIP section, just sitting there, taking it all in. He didn't move, didn't say anything, and didn't even crack a smile. He was totally focused on the last item, number 15.People started whispering about him. Is he broke? He hasn't bid on anything, someone mumbled. Others nodded in agreement, while Adrian and Elara looked annoyed. They figured Finn was just nervous, unsure of himself, or waiting to ask them for money. Ela
CHAPTER NINE.
9.Adrian and Elara stomped through the hall, faces tight with frustration. They'd spent the whole morning planning how to deal with Finn Rowe, and seeing him chilling in the VIP section, all calm and collected, just made them madder. Elara whipped out her phone and called someone at the Ashburn Group. Check today's VIP list, she snapped. Is Finn Rowe on it?A second later, they got their answer, and they both froze. He's not on the list, the person said. The only way he's in there is with a VIP trial card. He's not officially anyone.Elara's lips tightened. A trial card? That jerk is faking being a VIP, she muttered, disbelief mixed with anger. Adrian's jaw clenched. We'll expose him, he said, his voice low. He won't get away with this.Meanwhile, Finn was quietly sitting in the VIP corner. The fancy band on his wrist caught the light, a low-key sign of power that got people looking. He saw three young guys come up, all from rich families. They bowed a little, handing him their busin
CHAPTER EIGHT.
8.Adrian and Elara showed up at the place, and she was steamed to see Finn Rowe chilling in VIP with his band on full display. She was all, He shouldn't even be here! Someone do something!Adrian patted her shoulder, Relax. Finn's gonna get what's coming to him today. Trust. They strutted inside, eyes locked on Finn.As soon as they got to VIP, Adrian lost it. He flags down security, ranting that Finn wasn't legit. He's not a member! Get him out now!The room started buzzing. People were confused about what all the fuss was about. Elara and Darius jumped in, throwing insults and questioning Finn's right to be there.Finn just sat there, cool as a cucumber. He raised a hand and said to security, Are you letting anyone make stuff up here? Looks like you messed up. He had this quiet authority thing going on. I think you should fix your mistake.Security looked at each other, then nodded. He's right, one said. You insulted a guest and made a scene. Either leave quietly, or it won't be pr
CHAPTER SEVEN.
7.The lounge went quiet as Finn Rowe stood next to Mr. Galton. The crowd, who'd been laughing at him, now just stared, confused. Darius, red-faced, pushed forward, unable to hold back. Why are you siding with this nobody? he yelled at Mr. Galton, while sneering at Finn.Finn glanced at him, his eyes calm. Get them out of here and cancel any deals with them, now, he told Mr. Galton, his voice firm.The room went silent. Darius blinked, surprised that Mr. Galton seemed ready to listen. What? Are you serious? he shouted, his voice getting louder. You can't do this for a fool like him. He's nothing. Why are you listening to him?Mr. Galton didn't react. He looked at Finn, then nodded to the guards. As you wish, he said. Right away, Darius and the others were being taken out, complaining the whole time. Finn didn't even blink. He stayed cool, his eyes steady.As they were dragged away, Darius kept yelling insults, calling him a nobody who had no right to give orders. Elara, next to him, r
CHAPTER SIX.
6.A bunch of black Range Rovers screeched to a halt outside the Galton lounge, and heads swung their way. People waiting to meet Mr. Galton inside the hotel couldn't believe their eyes. The cars were shiny and black, and the low rumble of the engines seemed to shout, Power! Finn got out of the first car, a band on his wrist glinting. He walked coolly, like he owned the place.The waiting crowd was itching with curiosity. Whispers flew fast. Who's that? someone asked. Is he Valia royalty? another wondered. Everyone stared, unsure what to make of the guy swaggering in with such confidence.Inside, Elara spotted him first. Her eyes popped, then her brother-in-law and brother saw him too. Adrian, who was crushing on her, just froze. They hurried over, looking ticked off. What are you doing here? Elara snapped, blocking his path. Who said you could come here and mess with us?Her brother-in-law and brother jumped in, raising their voices. You don't belong here. Get lost before you embarra
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