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The Commander Who Couldn't Fight
Author: Queeny
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Success, Michael was quickly learning, came with its own quiet cruelties.

The victory against Corvin's team had made his name in the city's hunter community, but it had also revealed, in painful clarity, the true cost of the power he wielded. Borrowing an ability wasn't free. The stronger the skill, the heavier the toll on Michael's own body — a punishing drag of exhaustion, a headache like a spike driven behind his eyes, sometimes a trembling weakness in his limbs that lasted for hours after even a single use.

And Squad Command, for all its power, only let him draw on two abilities at once. Beyond that limit, his own body simply couldn't bear the strain.

"You're pushing too hard," Dahlia told him one evening, checking his vitals after a routine dungeon run that had required three separate borrowed abilities within the span of ten minutes. "Your body isn't built for this kind of load, Michael. Zero combat rating isn't just a number on a readout. It means your physical frame has almost no natural resilience to draw from when you overextend."

"I don't have a choice," Michael said. "If I don't borrow what the squad needs in the moment it's needed, someone gets hurt."

"And if you collapse mid-fight because you borrowed a third ability your body can't sustain, everyone gets hurt," Dahlia said, quiet but firm. "You have to choose. One powerful ability, or several weaker ones. You can't have both, not without breaking yourself."

Michael understood the warning. He simply didn't know, yet, how to actually apply it in the moment a real crisis arrived — and the crisis arrived sooner than any of them expected.

In the meantime, the toll was already visible in smaller ways. His hands had developed a faint, persistent tremor that only Dahlia noticed at first, a fine shiver that showed up hours after any dungeon run heavier than routine. He'd started waking at night with the same dragging headache regardless of whether he'd borrowed anything the day before, as though his body had begun keeping a running account of every debt it hadn't fully repaid. He said nothing about any of it to the rest of the squad. He told himself it wasn't worth worrying them over. Privately, some smaller, more honest part of him suspected he was simply afraid of what they might say if they understood exactly how much this was costing him — afraid, more than anything, that they might ask him to slow down, and that he might actually have to say no.

"You're not sleeping," Ryan said to him one morning, studying his face with the kind of scrutiny Michael had learned to dread. "You've got that look again."

"I'm fine," Michael said, the same automatic lie he'd been telling for weeks.

Ryan didn't push. But he didn't look convinced, either, and something in his expression — a quiet, watchful worry — lingered with Michael longer than he wanted to admit.

Three weeks later, the squad accepted a contract to clear a A-Class dungeon on the city's northern edge — a job well above their usual difficulty, taken because the pay was substantial and because, if Michael was honest with himself, he wanted to prove that the win against Corvin's team hadn't been a fluke.

It was, in hindsight, the wrong dungeon to prove that point in.

Halfway through the third chamber, the ceiling above their planned exit route collapsed without warning, sealing off the only path back to the surface and triggering a cascade of monster spawns from every direction at once — a coordinated ambush pattern that suggested, ominously, that this dungeon's core intelligence had been actively watching and adapting to their formation.

"We're cut off," Farrow reported, voice tight. "No exit route. Monsters incoming from three separate corridors, converging on our position in under ninety seconds."

Michael felt the shape of the disaster take form in his mind almost instantly — six people, boxed into a single chamber, facing a three-directional assault with no clean line of retreat. Every one of his squad members was already wounded from the earlier fighting. Bram's shield arm was bleeding freely. Ines had burned through most of her mana reserve. Ryan's discharge was running dangerously close to his own physical limit.

"Formation, tight circle, Dahlia at the center," Michael called, his voice steady despite the panic clawing up his throat. "Bram, hold the strongest approach. Kestrel, intercept anything that slips past him."

They held. Barely. But the monsters kept coming, wave after wave, and Michael could feel, with sickening clarity, the exact moment his squad's collective stamina began to buckle under the strain.

Ines went down first, a glancing blow from a spined lizard-type monster knocking her flat and draining what little mana reserve she had left to defend herself. Farrow dragged her back behind the line, but the gap she'd left behind was immediately exploited by two more monsters pouring through.

Michael's status window flared, unbidden, a new notification cutting through the chaos of the fight.

[Squad Command: 5 targets connected.]

[Temporary Full Synchronization available.]

[Warning: Risk Level — Extreme.]

He had never seen this option before. He didn't fully understand what it would cost him. But he understood, with total clarity, that his squad — the first people in his entire life who had ever chosen him — were about to die in a sealed chamber a hundred feet underground because two borrowed abilities weren't enough to save them.

Michael looked at the warning. Extreme risk. His body, already fragile by the System's own measurement, might not survive whatever came next.

He thought about Ryan's face the night he'd first been acknowledged. He thought about Ines staring at her own frost-marked hands in wonder. He thought about every single person who had looked at a Zero-Rank porter and, eventually, chosen to trust him with their lives.

He smiled — a small, tired, entirely genuine smile, the first true calm he'd felt since the chamber collapsed.

"Alright," he said quietly, to no one and everyone at once. "Let's do this."

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